Reviews for Places
Manabishi chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
It's been a long time since I read something as pleasant as this in the GB section. It was an interesting look that of Juubei's positions, and the part of 'above and beneath', although it was kinda graphic (I liked it, although took me by surprise, I wasn't expecting that at the begining xd) it also transmitted Kazuki's need for Juubei in a sexual way, and not just the clasic "I'm so in love".

Also, I have to say the parts about what hand he uses to pick the phone, and that he felt like experimenting, were brilliant.

The only thing is, Makubex called Kazuki, but the conversation went like it was Kazuki who actually called Makubex.

Apart from that, it was a very good fic. I wish you could write more about Juubei and Kazuki, this one was short but I think you got Kazuki's personality really well : D