|Reviews for To Catch a Killer|
| ClosetFMAfan chapter 19 . 9/9/2013
I suppose a scene like that certainly does deserve a review XD
I *loved* the canonical parallels in this chapter with Envy's scene. And how you changed him turning into Gracia into mimicking her voice? Very clever. Though I have to wonder how you're going to keep going from here. Hmm. Let's see, Riza's going to be threatened with death, Roy doesn't do it and she gets saved anyways, then he still gets busted in a different way and with the help of everyone they discover the true plot and win the day!
Guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out :D
| Cap'nHoozits chapter 18 . 8/29/2013
Nice sting operation! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
| Cap'nHoozits chapter 16 . 8/28/2013
I'm coming up for air after reading this far. This is a really good AU interpretation. Lots of original drama while still retaining lots of elements from the original story. I like how you've used so many characters and how you've placed them in the story. I thought it was particularly interesting how you made Scar's brother the psychologist. So I'm going to dive back in again!
| Ookami.makuda chapter 18 . 8/26/2013
yeah, yeah, im looking forward all my time, so update soon!
| royriza4ever chapter 18 . 8/26/2013
NOT A CLIFFFHANGER! Update soon please! But yay! Al is safe!
| ecmwrites chapter 18 . 8/26/2013
Oh my! Very exciting! I can't wait for the next update, please let it be soon! :)
| Sadekuuro chapter 18 . 8/26/2013
Cliffhangers seem to be becoming a thing here...
Team Mustang just can't seem to catch a break, with all the action. I'm at the edge of my seat here, so I hope you update again soon!
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/26/2013
""Where's Lust? !""
Attack every mistake guys. We have to, it's punishment for the cliffhanger.
| October25 chapter 17 . 8/16/2013
thanks so much for updating I love this!
| royriza4ever chapter 17 . 8/13/2013
Really good chapter with a really evil cliffhanger! Update soon!
| ecmwrites chapter 17 . 8/5/2013
Oh! This was goooood. I really liked the death of Lust.
So excited for the update! :)
| ecmwrites chapter 16 . 8/5/2013
Ah! This is getting so interesting! I feel bad for Winry. The poor girl is pregnant and Ed is off getting involved in a life-threatening conspiracy.
Aside from that, I'm so excited to continue reading.
| ecmwrites chapter 15 . 8/5/2013
I like the confrontation. It reminds me of the scene when Bradley threatened Ed, Al, and Mustang after the Gluttony incident. I'm very anxious to see how you develop this. I'm seeing a lot of things in the story coming together that haven't yet, and I'm excited to see them play out. :)
| ecmwrites chapter 14 . 8/5/2013
Ah! I think this chapter was great. The only thing I would comment on was Scar's dialect during the interrogation.
"Cut to the chase" doesn't sound like something that character would say, he's more formal or at least doesn't use terms such as that in the series.
Aside from that, I loved this chapter.
Oh! I knew it! The grand revealing of her news was great. I loved how dumbstruck he was. I think for this universe, having him be happy immediately worked perfectly. Being a good father will be the new thing for him to strive for.
| ecmwrites chapter 13 . 8/5/2013
Ah! Great chapter. I loved the dinner scene. The additions to the 'team' and Ed having 'a lot of people that he trusts' reminds me a lot of Hughes. I like the connections that are made between them, and even the comparisons between Winry and Gracia. I could see them being a more chaotic version of the Hughes family. :)
The set up to catch Scar was an interesting read. I really like how you're weaving him into the Homunculus group in a way.
Can't wait to read what happens next.