|Reviews for To Catch a Killer|
| ec-writes chapter 20 . 11/19/2013
Great chapter! I love the coming together of different officials to help bring down Bradley. Very well done.
Oh, Ed and Mustang. I love Winry's comment about 'having an affair'. Too funny!
And he WOULD pull his father into that plan. Oh boy.
Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
| Sadekuuro chapter 21 . 11/19/2013
And so we're off to another gala. At least they've caught Kimblee now, so that's one thing less to worry about. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Sorry for the late review, school just decided to eat my soul :)
| QueenCari1129 chapter 21 . 11/16/2013
Okay, this is honestly one of the best AU's I've read on here. It's pretty creative and worth reading.
Now then, time to wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
| erico637 chapter 21 . 11/14/2013
If you can make it so ed loses his right arm somewhere along the story, making it end up like the opposite of the manga where he loses an arm instead of getting it back, i would be a very happy camper. Maybe it gets chopped off by a sword in Bradley's old war collection? Perhaps in a confrontation with either Bradley or Selim? Also, your story is amazing. I like it! (Yes, I'm a little cruel with the characters I like, but think of the edwin fluff that would result!)
| OstensiblyInsane chapter 21 . 11/13/2013
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa you suck! CLIFFHANGED! AAAAAAAHHHH
| Sokkasm chapter 21 . 11/11/2013
This story is fantastic! I can't remember if I reviewed before, but I'm pretty sure I didn't. Actually, I think I might have. Whatever, that's irrelevant.
I'm glad you have some of the next chapter written! Woo!
| Amber Hastings chapter 20 . 11/2/2013
This was awesome... you had my wheels turning! hahahhaha
True, you took your time, but I can't deny it was worth it.
please, I want to know the end of this!..
I'll be back when you are.
| Sadekuuro chapter 20 . 10/29/2013
I love how everything's coming together. I really curious about how Ed's plan will work out!
| Guest chapter 20 . 10/28/2013
Oh goodness, if Ed's more than considering visiting his 'father', and WILLINGLY, you KNOW things are serious.
Ah, I almost pity the guy when they catch him. Then I remember he ordered the murder of Hughes, so I sit down at a computer and politely type up a horrendous torture scene JUST for HIM. *smiles*
Absolutely love this story - can't wait for the next update.
| OstensiblyInsane chapter 20 . 10/28/2013
the word quickly should not be in this story.
It just ain't right, man!
| ec-writes chapter 19 . 9/14/2013
Ah! This was so good!
I'm so excited to read what you have planned next!
I wish I could name what show inspired the scene. Lol.
| Sadekuuro chapter 19 . 9/13/2013
Wow, the end was intense... I loved the parallels to canon, both in Mustang and Envy's dialogue and Envy's ability to change his voice. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes next, especially considering how Mustang actually killed Envy instead of being talked down. I hope you update again soon!
| royriza4ever chapter 19 . 9/10/2013
Yay for amazing chapters! And Roy finally shot Envy! *pumps fist in the air in victory*
| Guest chapter 19 . 9/9/2013
Whoa. You wanted to write... THAT since you started? Holy chiz...
| ClosetFMAfan chapter 19 . 9/9/2013
I suppose a scene like that certainly does deserve a review XD
I *loved* the canonical parallels in this chapter with Envy's scene. And how you changed him turning into Gracia into mimicking her voice? Very clever. Though I have to wonder how you're going to keep going from here. Hmm. Let's see, Riza's going to be threatened with death, Roy doesn't do it and she gets saved anyways, then he still gets busted in a different way and with the help of everyone they discover the true plot and win the day!
Guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out :D