|Reviews for To Catch a Killer|
| Guest chapter 23 . 12/9/2013
Mmm. Let me begin by saying congratulations. This was well written, absolutely captivating, and rather realistic. I can't even complain about the automail (not that I would) considering recent advances in prosthetic technology. The last line is also well appreciated, bringing everything back to the near-beginning, with Hughes.
I also like the idea of a sequel, especially with what you have planned out. I have but one complaint: don't you usually FIND a killer before you CATCH them? Arguably, to even catch them, they have to be found, because to secure them, you have to find where they had been trapped. But other than that, I absolutely love the idea and can't wait to see who you're pitting up against the FMA cast.
| ec-writes chapter 23 . 12/9/2013
The ending was absolutely perfect. I loved all of it.
The interrogation was well done, as well as his conversation with Gracia and the get together at the Elric's.
Personally, I'd love to see a sequel.
A baby Elric nearly there, Poor Ed dealing with a killer nipping at his heels, Roy and Riza getting pumped up for that repeal- it would all be a fun read!
This was a very fun read, and should you ever write another FMA piece, I'd definitely be one of the many to read it.
| Abbalina chapter 23 . 12/9/2013
I would love to read TO FIND A KILLER! It's sounds great so far!
| Teki chapter 23 . 12/9/2013
YES PLEASE SEQUEL! Let me tell you, this is probably my favorite AU out of all that I've seen. Great work, and I hope you do write a sequel!
| Amber Hastings chapter 23 . 12/9/2013
OMG!... I can't believe it's finished! I don't want it to be finished... If you loved writing this I can bet you will love writing the sequel, am I right? Please. That summary sounds intriguing.
This was awesome, congratulations you have made a unique piece of work and I'm sure a lot of people, besides me, just love it.
On a side note, I think I have to say this: I feel like the automail installation wasn't quite right. I mean it's supposed to be a lengthy process. A normal rehab lasts three years. The initial surgery and port installation takes some days, and from there some time has to happen before the actual automail arm can be attached. And you made it happen in four days! not even the building of the arm is that fast. So I felt it a little rushed and unreal... but that's just me.
I know you probably wanted Ed to be up and about for the ending, and I loved it... but, in my opinion, it didn't add up.
Aside from that, this was perfectly awesome and I enjoyed every word of it. THANK YOU.
I hope you get around to write the sequel.
| ObiwanDS chapter 23 . 12/9/2013
Wow. I can't believe that it's over now. You did a phenomenal job with this story, truly capturing the essence of the characters while skillfully adjusting them to how you wanted. Kudos to you! Anyways, in terms of a sequel: YES! The sad thing about endings are that they end. But with sequels, the story continues! So yes, please let there be a sequel. Cheers, and once again, great job!
| Hotspot the 626th chapter 23 . 12/9/2013
Great story! I'm excited to read the next part! I bet that's when Homunculus shows up! Along with the missing Selim.
| Lizzie chapter 23 . 12/9/2013
Thank you for taking the time to write such an amazing story. I've never read one, or even heard of one, like this before. All the hard work that went into this story really shows. So, once again, thank you.
I would love for you to write the sequel. It sounds like it would be another great read. Just reading the summary made me excited. Lol,
| Animemad10 chapter 23 . 12/9/2013
A great story has come to an end :(
It was an awesome story and really well written but this is just me being annoying when I say that I hate when something exciting happens the chapter before, and is not continued , then I have to imagine what happened inbetween! As I say that's a really small thing!
Please write the sequel, it sounds amazing!
| Sokkasm chapter 23 . 12/9/2013
You really put a lot of time and effort into this story, and it really paid off.
The story exceeded my expectations, and I regret not reviewing every chapter for it. I'm an idiot. The plot was unique and fantastic. I've always liked AUs, and this one is amazing.
I really hope you do that sequel...it looks interesting.
| ec-writes chapter 22 . 12/6/2013
What a freaking chapter!
Great description on the battle, it was really superb.
The intensity in the moments before Mustang made the final call with Bradley was written perfectly.
Poor Edward. :(
Can't wait for the wrap up!
| Amber Hastings chapter 22 . 12/2/2013
Ok, this is getting kind of addictive...
I was wondering how would you make him lose his arm. I think I got my answer, didn't I?
I can't help but being suspicious... maybe is nothing, but... well, let's say I don't know what the writer is thinking... But... Why Al didn't answer his phone? He was honestly really busy with the party, or is something else is lurking in the shadows and this is not the end of it?
Was Bradley the real Homunculus Corp's president or is there an even bigger fish?
How does "Father" play into this? Or he isn't worth a part in this AU?
(Sorry, I think I've read a little too much Katzenbach and Lee Child for it to be healthy)
Be back when you are!
| LuvversLuvvie chapter 22 . 12/1/2013
ACK! SUSPENSE IS SUSPENSEFUL! PLEASE DON'T KEEP US WAITING LONG! DAMMIT, WHY DOES YOUR WRITING HAVE TO BE SO ADDICTING? UPDATE SOON PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE
| ToscaThorCat chapter 22 . 11/26/2013
Ed's gonna lose his arm, isn't he? I like this story! I am so glad you decided to continue it!
| FwooshEye chapter 22 . 11/26/2013
Very good. Though I have to admit I had forgotten his arm wasn't automail in this fic, so I was a little confused a moment until I remembered it was only his leg xD Looking forward to the final wrap-up!