|Reviews for To Catch a Killer|
| ec-writes chapter 3 . 8/4/2013
The interaction between Winry and Roy was pleasing to read. It's always interesting to see characters that are connected by others interact without the knowledge of how they might be connected.
I like your mentioning of the Tringhams. I always enjoyed those two.
I'm interested in what Ed was thinking about with the blood.
| ec-writes chapter 2 . 8/4/2013
EdWin is my favorite pairing, and I like how you're handling them.
Al and Mei are adorable, I'm excited to see how they play a part in this.
| ec-writes chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
Great first chapter. I like the AU that you're creating. The characters are well written, and I'm eager to see what you do with the plot you've created.
| OstensiblyInsane chapter 11 . 8/4/2013
THE F, NOT THE D! IT'S NOT THAT HARD!
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/4/2013
I'd fix those if I were you.
| Amber Hastings chapter 17 . 8/3/2013
OMG... this is amazing! The characters are so loyal to their personalities. Their profile is the same. And you're following the same facts as in brotherhood. It's happening exactly the same, just diferent circumstances. Key events that reshape their relashionship dinamics, especially Mustang's with Ed and Hawkeye. Hahaha...
you know, i'm kinder of waiting for the parte where Ed losses his right arm and Bradley takes pregnant Winry as hostage. Just like in the series.
Right know I feel like we are in the part when Mustang kills Lust after she hurts Havoc.
Anyway, this is awesome. Please update soon!
| Pipsqueak Ninja chapter 17 . 8/1/2013
I have to say I'm really enjoying this! I just started reading this a little bit ago and I haven't been able to walk away from my laptop for the last two hours. I love how everyone is in character and you've nicely converted the manga/anime into a modern day cop/detective story. I'll have to keep an eye on this one. :)
I look forward to the next update!
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/30/2013
No! Cliffy! How dare you! T.T
| Sadekuuro chapter 17 . 7/30/2013
Another cliffhanger! So very, very cruel... I'm rather excited to see how the situation with Lust plays out, as well as what happened to Ed. I hope you update again soon!
| OstensiblyInsane chapter 5 . 7/29/2013
I like how Fokker's name sounds like Fucker. ω
| ClosetFMAfan chapter 16 . 5/24/2013
I first saw this story when it only had four or five chapters and I thought "Wow, this seems pretty good, I'm definitely going to have to keep an eye on this!"
Then all of a sudden it had 16.
And this is the last chapter.
I'm not happy. Quite insistent upon another chapter, in fact. So this is me, insisting.
| Leocht chapter 16 . 5/13/2013
Sorry if I sounded like a jerk in my last review, and you should seriously watch NCIS. It's realy good!
| Leocht chapter 9 . 5/11/2013
Is Vorac Gluttony? If so, I figured that out pretty quickly just by his name. Points for the idea for his name though.
| InfiniteAnimeHolic chapter 16 . 5/8/2013
OH NO OH NO EDWARDDDDDD
CLIFFIE! The sneaking in part was cool, and the cliffhanger left me all like.. NOOOOO
Please never abandon this story ;-; I love it
Update soon ah!
| Moosaurus chapter 16 . 5/7/2013
I'm so glad I found this fic. Thank you for taking the time and effort to write this. You incorporate elements from the original storyline in a creative manner and I appreciate that. Other AU fics quickly fall into stereotypes but you've done a fantastic job so far. Looking forward to reading more. :)