Reviews for My World changed in an Instant
shinigami02master chapter 6 . 1/9/2013
awww so cute
Guest chapter 6 . 7/16/2012
aww its soo good. i love lena xD
poisonheart51 chapter 6 . 7/14/2012
poisonheart51 chapter 5 . 7/14/2012
:D this... is... ADORABLE!
Guest chapter 6 . 7/4/2012
More please C: This is adorable!
CookiesN'Cream124 chapter 6 . 6/29/2012
Please continue! It's getting good!
Guest chapter 3 . 6/29/2012
Just a few things... First of all, this story is really over-dramatic in the way that it's written... It seems like he's a whiny ten year old, rather than an adult who has to take of a child.

Also, in chapter one, he calls Lena Leeny. *His* Leeny. But he's never met her... generally people don't give nicknames to people they've never met.
Nerd-Herd-27 chapter 6 . 6/9/2012
I absolutely ADORE this story! Lena is so cute, and Neal is so good with her, and, gosh, it just makes me smile! :) I hope you continue with this, I'm looking forward to reading more.
JeanneZ84 chapter 6 . 6/1/2012
Very cute Story.

JeanneZ84 chapter 5 . 6/1/2012
I love Sweet,Charming and sad all at the same time.

JeanneZ84 :)
huge sg1 fan chapter 6 . 5/6/2012
that was such a cute chapter. i loved it. can't wait to read more. hope you update again soon. :)
alex chapter 6 . 4/10/2012
I agree, I hope you include Sara in this fic. I'm excited to see if El will get to meet Lena. Keep up the great work.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/7/2012
Awww. That was cute! Update soon!
carlacipo chapter 6 . 4/7/2012
Love the princess bit. Kids are so honest. Very cute
ZeniaFlower chapter 5 . 4/7/2012

OMG! NEAL a kid!

I hope you get Sara in there somewhere b/c this is just to cute and i kinda wanna see Lena get into some sticky situations b.c tat would be interesting

Keep up the good work and update sooN!
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