Reviews for A Terrible Jinxx
Theta-McBride chapter 13 . 8/16/2012
lol. This was awesome. :)
Loved the "I went to the beach and found:" Game. I play that sometimes, too. It annoys the people who aren't playing.
Restrained.Freedom chapter 13 . 6/16/2012
I found this chapter absurdly bizarre, but I really enjoyed it.

All the banter about the beach...

And...

Was the kiss a dream? Was the end of the last chapter real or dream? I kinda got confused about timing... Like Murtagh seems always to be getting up from a long sleep. He isn't narcoleptic is he? XDD
The M.H.T.of R chapter 13 . 6/12/2012
'Jinxx and I talk about many thing Murtagh, you are often the subject.'

Forgot an 's'. ;)
TheNightWhispers chapter 12 . 5/31/2012
I loved this chapter! :DDD It was nice how Murtagh didnt know what to say when Jinxx asked if he loved her.

Anyways, update soon! ;D
Restrained.Freedom chapter 12 . 5/26/2012
This was really cool.

I loved that he didn't want to say either yes or no... and that it was almost his subconscious self answering...

I would say this was a brilliant chapter.
The M.H.T.of R chapter 12 . 5/25/2012
Murtagh probably would have shaved with magic, and I can't quite see him lazing around when he doesn't know where Thorn and Jinxx are, but other than that it was good. :)
Wolf Of The Dawn chapter 2 . 5/25/2012
Lucky 30th reviewer! :D Sorry I haven't read much of this story, but now I promice I'll start. :P

Great so far, so excited for the next chapter!
AlexandraTheGreat410 chapter 12 . 5/25/2012
Okay, not trying to be mean, but this is so confusing. I have absolutely no idea what is going on. Clear things up, quickly.
TheNightWhispers chapter 11 . 4/23/2012
Neat chapter! Ehehe, sorry i havent reviewed in a while, ive been busy. But, i really liked the last few chapter:) Update soon! :DDD

Oh, and in one of the chapter, you had a quote. It went "ive found a place as far as i can see this place lies within the depths of my dreams." Where did you get that quote?
Not at home to mr grumpy chapter 11 . 4/14/2012
Can't wait to read more!
The M.H.T.of R chapter 11 . 4/13/2012
What will happen next? IWANTTOKNOW! :P Really, I can't think of anything else to say. Sorry. You is doin' good tho.
Restrained.Freedom chapter 11 . 4/13/2012
Possessed by something that wants to feed the children... hmm what could THAT be?...

Revived, and survived, and awakened, the red rider struggles up and flies off with a swan filled dragon... but no Jinxx?

Hmm...
AlexandraTheGreat410 chapter 11 . 4/13/2012
I feel like this entire story began with questions, and every new chapter just rings new questions haven't even been solved. Maybe you should focus on those first.
The M.H.T.of R chapter 10 . 4/12/2012
There's no one to feed the children! I don't know why but that made me laugh. Your writing style is definitely improving! Keep a close eye on Jinxx though, so she don't turn Sue on you. I think you're OK though. Lately you've been doing really well.
Restrained.Freedom chapter 10 . 4/12/2012
I am sorry. I am clueless. This is bizarre.

0.o
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