Reviews for Deadly Waters
PiperMclean chapter 7 . 6/15/2012
TheAnonymousReviewer chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Very Good Story, Love the Characters!

also, I think that you should keep doing Jacolbis' Point of view! He is One of My Favorites so far

Best or Luck!
12345678910111213 chapter 6 . 6/11/2012
Awesome story
treehuggerluna chapter 3 . 3/25/2012
Wow, your story is really creative! I can't wait till the next update!

Though I do have a question. Didn't Michael Yew die in the war against Kronos?

Keep it going!
skylands chapter 3 . 2/23/2012
I LOVE this story!

Really cool idea :)

Keep Updating PLEASE!

Just one thing, if this is after the war, is'nt Michael Yew supposed to have died? :P
AnotherStripedSweater chapter 3 . 2/6/2012
This is really good! Can you please update soon?
EllaIncarnate chapter 3 . 2/6/2012
this is very good. you have an interesting and easy to read style of writing and good instincts for POV changes. I would suggest a bit more description of what people and landscapes look like, just to put-you-there a bit more. but that is really it. keep writing, please.
neverusethis chapter 3 . 2/6/2012
Love it.
Purely Fandom Trash chapter 2 . 1/6/2012
Katie Gardner chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
THIS IS NOT A FLAME! Your plot sounds pretty good, but please try to use the enter bar if you want more readers!
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