Reviews for A Lesson in Magic
CrimsonKitsune333 chapter 4 . 2/6/2012
I liked this very much! Its well written, and the story is interesting! I can't wait for your next update!
akuma-river chapter 4 . 2/3/2012
Quite interesting.

I wonder where you plan to take the story? Will Death Eaters pop up?
ChocolateBeth chapter 4 . 2/3/2012
Wow... That's all I can really say. This is the first Sherlock/HP fic ive read, and let's just say its so good I dont think I could read another one without comparing every little thing to this. It's just amazing. Your writing, characterisation, pace, plot, everything really, is just incredible! Please please please update soon!

Love Beth xxx XD
charliebrown1234 chapter 4 . 1/31/2012
I like it. Maybe a little rambling with the extended flashback, but good none the less. Update in a week, or I will remind you!

(Just kidding, no I won't, I have problems kicking myself to update!)

mist shadow chapter 4 . 1/31/2012
that will explain a lot. especially why Mycroft is so overprotective of his brother, to the point of being overbearing. but after a scare like that, it's no wonder

and I'd bet Sherlock didn't have that good of school experience either. he's too unique even for the WW
mist shadow chapter 3 . 1/31/2012
ah, how predictable and dull, explaining everything over a dinner. sometimes normal is the welcome change though

*raises a brow* Bones herself showed up? wonder if they had shortage of people at that time, or he showed certain promise that the Head of DMLE decided to appraise him

oh, and it's Obliviators, not Obliterators, as the spell is Obliviate
mist shadow chapter 2 . 1/31/2012
yep, that's Watson for you, disbelieve and anger for perceived lie, after all we're all human, but reading the signs and fast deduction. maybe he spends too much time with Sherlock, 'if you eliminate the impossible, the rest however improbable...'

and I can understand Sherlock, that would've been my reaction - dinner?
lightsjourney chapter 4 . 1/31/2012
Agh! I can't wait to read more!
mist shadow chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
ah, what a nightmare. or more precisely a memory

*shakes head* we always knew that Sherlock is a bit disturbed, and tries to solve all those mysteries to avoid thinking, to make his brain work without giving it time to ponder past, as that brings up bad memories

he really must care about Watson, as a friend, as someone who tolerates him and is interesting enough to be tolerated, that his subconscious acted before his mind caught up with him. another reason for him to hate feelings and emotions
lightsjourney chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
This is amazing! I was hooked after the first paragraph!
mistyfoxdreams chapter 4 . 1/30/2012
this chapter was awesome! :D i liked how you portrayed the reactions of sherlock, mycorft and his family to the beating that happened.
Depresnajk chapter 4 . 1/29/2012
love it)
Depresnajk chapter 3 . 1/29/2012
Thanks for updating & keep up the good work
wolfawaken chapter 4 . 1/29/2012
Why are you not happy with this chapter it was brilliant!
Synthetic Memories chapter 4 . 1/29/2012
This story is definatley turning into a very interesting piece- I'm so glad that Mycroft is there to look after little Sherlock (both young and old!) and yes, he does rather make his own plans than refer to any muse. He's magical in his own way.

The flashbacks are a good setup for a future plot, so I do find them necessary. However, I'm unsure if you're just doing a character study with magic or are going to expand into a murder mystery. Either is fine with me, if that matters :)

Excellent story- keep up the good work!
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