Reviews for What Now!
shadowwolf2345 chapter 10 . 11/29
It's very good I really like it you should write more soon when you can.
PoseidonPrince chapter 10 . 11/17
Not Bad
giboh92 chapter 10 . 11/11
Update soon...
David M. Potter chapter 10 . 10/12
What a wonderful story! Bravo!
David M. Potter chapter 2 . 10/10
David M. Potter chapter 1 . 10/10
Great start! Brilliant!
Woman613 chapter 10 . 9/29
Please write next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/20
Memory problems could be solved by ocaclemsey ordering and fortafiying and protecting ones mind i.e. mind palace/fortresses
dobbys-stinger chapter 10 . 9/3
hope for a update
mattaweber chapter 10 . 8/24
please continue!
Jhn1 chapter 4 . 8/23
small oops.
100 tons works out to just over a billion dollars at a round figure of $350 troy ounce which is about what was was in late 92.
also 100 tons is beyond the road capacity, let alone what any remotely normal semi tractor trailer can bear.
Solution for both is that 25 mil was for the the first batch of what eventually totaled 100 tons

Third OOPS is that his mother's side is unlikely to have owned Potter Mines. And his father's side would have been known to the magicals including the goblins.
Solution for that would be change it to Evans Mines.

Keep writing
Hells book 666 chapter 2 . 8/2
i love your story's i rally in joy the working of your mind please finish this lovely stony think you I'm a rally big fan of harry potter
MARDONSGT chapter 10 . 8/1
Great story like the direction and the plot line. Keep up good work.
debsel chapter 10 . 7/21
this is awesome cant wait for more chapters hope you update soon!
Skywroe chapter 10 . 7/17
LOVE IT! Please do carry on.
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