|Reviews for His Father's Son Revised|
| merlinreveal3 chapter 2 . 3/2
It's Queen Annis though...
| wolfnymph1 chapter 10 . 9/24/2013
no you are aggravating. ass
| Ppsh chapter 15 . 1/6/2013
Good story. It's funny actually, I had initially expected this premise to happen in the show when Merlin showed up and the Queen was angry and kind of looked at him like she was considering it. It also makes sense to have Morgana as her champion, regardless of whether she was meant to pick a warrior or not.
| Gwen chapter 15 . 12/31/2012
Stupid oversized lizards. Trolololololol! Wow, that was great! I aculy think this is better than the episode! Amaizing job! I really enjoyed reading this! :-)
Oh, and sorry for my poor english :-P
| Gwen chapter 14 . 12/31/2012
That was great! I think through that you could add a little more feeling, for example: „She needed no one, at least that's what she told herself.” Could become : „She needed no one! At least that's what she told herself.”
| Gwen chapter 13 . 12/31/2012
Ah, the Lady Morgana yell again! :-) . It was SO funny when Morgana was just like: „What!? Are you just going to let me kill you?!” Lol
| Gwen chapter 7 . 12/31/2012
Bahahaha! Agvaine never sucheed! Sereously, he is just SO unlucky! :-D
| Gwen chapter 3 . 12/31/2012
| Gwen chapter 2 . 12/31/2012
Wow! Can't wait to read more! :-)
| Gwen chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
| TruffleHead chapter 15 . 12/27/2012
Stupid oversized lizards. XD *bursts into hysterical laughter* D That was wonderful, a great read. Very funny. D
| TruffleHead chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Wow! Very good so far, a very, very good idea! Never seen anything like this before. However, remember that like in the sentence:
"Stop. Just... go sleep.. your going to need it." Arthur said waving him off.
The "your" would instead be a "you're" because it is a contraction of you and are. A simple mistake, easy to make but easy to fix. :) Again, great job so far! I need to go read the rest. :)
| Judy chapter 2 . 10/15/2012
YES! YES! YES! MORE PLEASE! Love this!
| servant123 chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
Yes! I was hoping for Morgana! Take her down, Merlin!
Anyways, good chapter :) Can't wait to read the rest!
God bless :)
| Yuki082 chapter 15 . 6/19/2012
thanks for writing!