This is a one of a kind story you got here, I like this story that you got here.

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Well... I have nothing to complain about, I like the story, it flows well and I hope that it eventually gets updated.

I just read this through, very good story! I'm trying to write as well, so I know it isn't easy, I hope those jerks don't drive you away from writing!

I'd say that's where my other favorite Naruto fanfiction very impressive look forward to reading more thank you

Forgot how much I loved this story! Loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one! :)

please update soon, been waiting for a while for the next update

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I think the scene would have been better if the he was just going back to the village and he wasn't thinking about het and ended up being surprised. Besides the servant of the princess would've made funnier by the fact that we would constantly remind Naruto of the match. I rate this with a 9.3/10.0

Are you going to let this be 7 chapters or you can continue the story I really like it and you're right Naruto was an idiot for passing up that option but on the other hand I almost felt was almost honorable I think you are right about one thing he did give up on Sakura because because she knew she could never change the type of person she was a very shallow person who only saw the outside of someone nothing inside and she only saw Naruto is a little brother because she's obsessed with Sasuke from early childhood and just so you know someone personally does not change once a shallow person always a shallow person and she'll never change who she is because she chooses not to but she becomes comfortable it's like wearing old leather you know no other way of feeling so that is why should never seen out there for anything more than a little brother because of what she conceives a promotion in the anime her obsession with Sasuke begin with her best friend Ino they won't want to fit in and that is her relationship with Sasuke in a nutshell but I think the downside to that was not there was supposed to die in the 4th Shinobi war in the original story it was a save himself to sleep Sasuke from being betrayed by Obito Uchiha and if you remember some of the anime later the feelings that we always compare and Obito uchia to Naruto's personality so what does saying is Naruto and Obito was supposed to just like a Obito Uchiha dying at the end of the third Shinobi War the same as friend Kakashi from the rocks Naruto supposed to save Sasuke from being double-crossed that's what the child probably does an order for the peace that these sorts the comes a sacrifice for that kind of Peace the ultimate sacrifice his only the prophecy child can make Destin to make and that is why I think Studios Pierrot me to change into the end of the original draft Square what's his name said he had never completed the story so it was their idea to make it that way when you do that you devalue the story of Naruto just my opinion but you still is very well done so good job let me know if you plan to make some more have a nice Thanksgiving

I feel great promise in this story but I get the feeling you are lazily pushing these out.

How does it take 4 years to make 7 chapters if I can do those in a week.

The story is good the execution of your uploads however are extremely lacking especially since these are quite short chapters too.

Awesome story so far! I'm interested to see Naruto's reaction to the discovery that he's going to be a father! I also want to see how much feminine fury Shizuka unleashes on Tobi, lol.

Keep up the great work!

P.s. I hope all is well, I have a friend who has had multiple heart surgeries, so I know from him how much it can suck. If you ever need/want to talk, just pm me and I'll be an open ear.

Peace!

I I look forward to reading your happily ever after Naruto fanfic I'm sorry I'd miss pronunciate the name continue keeping up the good work and thank you for this wonderful story and have a great Halloween and no spiking the fruit punch just kidding

Hey sorry about the idiot harassing you about your fanfiction pay no attention to the more on this story is very well written I look forward to reading more and I'm sorry that it is bothering you just pay no attention to the idiot behind the curtain you don't know me I like this story to you did very nice I continue to look forward to reading it and tell that you know you can because he's doing an Anonymous review just ignore the idiot he's just trying to Rattle your cage I'm looking forward to reading more of this fanfic good luck and thanks of rightness

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