|Reviews for Uncertainty|
| Peach Tuesday's chapter 11 . 1/17/2012
ahhh no it's over?
it was super cute (:
and please feel free to share your imagination with all of us haha
| Skyler-A-Teloiv chapter 11 . 1/15/2012
...Im not sure how to respond to this chapter. Wow, nicest hammer blow ive ever witnessed.
So, happy endings for all...thats good. No more RobRae BBStar stories Okay? Youve actually made me sad that the story has ended.
Although, the idea of the Brain and Slade IS an intriguing one.
| RabulaTasa chapter 11 . 1/15/2012
Just got back from drill and read this, and I must say that you've exceeded little old me's expectations with this entire story. Well done!
p.s." Also, congratulations on knocking all seven out of the park.
| babytiger5360 chapter 11 . 1/13/2012
Yea! It was great! But I think that idea of the brain & salde is waaaaaayyyy to wrong! Cant wait to see what you have planned next! :D see ya!
| Tekka Dark chapter 11 . 1/13/2012
ok...now i know i like the story stolen.. thought that one was great as a oneshot, and definatly wanted to see where that could have gone, since i had never read a Star/BB before...but wow...im really impressed and so sad that its over already .
it was a great story, that was so very well written!...and this last chapter was no exception..
it was simple and it told the story...it re-caped on things needed to be said and then moved to the cute scene with star and BB...they do so shine together ...and i really like the openeing scene mid flight...you can jsut tell how happy star is!..and seening BB walk over as a horse and nuzzle her and swat at the guy...that was great!
to be honest i really do want to see more of this story...and i really hope that you continue it ...and "sunshine, lollipops and rainbows" most definatly fit with them...and its honestly nice to see that it acutally could work like that...but i would also like to see how it would work in the future...and if they could hold up to what kinda of thigns a future could bring...hmm...sorry i was just thinking about all the possilbilities...but i won't get my hopes up...too high XP
it was a great story kry! you took a great base and built from it, and really took the characters in a different kind of direction, while still staying so true to their core...the reasons we love reading about them...i had a really great time reading it ...but then you know me...i do love BB's character...and he just so fits with Star...or maybe its just that you can write it so well...either way XP...the story really brought a smile to my face and i couldn't get enough of it ...Awsome job Kry!
| secretkp831 chapter 11 . 1/13/2012
I'm actually sad to see that this story is over. Your writing ability is amazing. I also like that this story forced me do two things. First it made me open up a read about a couple outside of my comfort zone. Secondly it made me realize that if you put in the effort and have great writing skills you can make almost any couple believable. Thank you for writing a story that made people give another couple a try and letting others see that no character has to be destroyed for the sake of their OTP. Not sure if you have another story in the works but I will keep a look out for any. Great story.
| SugarApple chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
I will NOT lie to you here,I cried.
Literally. I mean tears rolled down my face and I bawled like a baby.
This was so...so delicate...so well crafted so...so *beautiful*. I nearly flipped a blip when I realized you were ending it. But MAN talk about closure.
I admire you, you whipped this fic and made the pairings WORK. You've got skill, I tip my hat to you.
Rob/Rae was awesome, BB/Star was adorkkkkkable. And everybody else was hilarious. I loved the character growth, the breaking up, the piecing together, the moving on, the angst,the forgiveness and the building anew. I have to read this again, I am so serious. I cried man I...I can't type anymore.
| Love to read chapter 11 . 1/13/2012
Me again! You know I'm beginning to think this is a start of a beautiful acquaintanceship. Anyways, to answer your question at the end of the this chapter... I don't think I can tolerate another Robin and Raven - incest opinion, remember? Though Star/BB, I must confess, is adoring to an extent. I am glad for things to turn out well for Starfire especially, she had been one of my favorite heroines after Storm, She Hulk, and Wonder Woman.
Before I ask my question I want to point something out; have you read about DC Comic's Starfire on Wikipedia? There is an actual controversy about her character in the old comics, how an edit-in-chief and critics states she's basically portrayed a "Wish-fulfillment sex object". When I read some comics in the eighties and so on, I realized they were right, and you can imagine how disappointed I was, since I advocate for women's rights. When the Teen Titans series aired, seeing Starfire as an innocent and adoringly naive character made me think of combining both Starfires into one (with splish-splashes of my own ideas).
As I said, I'm a writer, who has created her own characters and plots. I am working on my goal to produce my own graphic novels, with African American characters (since we don't have enough).
But when I'm not working on my story - due to writer's block, and I hate when I cross it - I write multiverses as a pass-time, so I won't rust in my talent as a writer and artist in general, plus it's fun and it hones my imagination. I've done one for Final Fantasy VII, Gargoyles, Naruto, Dragon Ball Z, basically favorites when I was young. Though I technically keep those stories to myself, because I'm a private person, and it feels awkward and uncomfortable for me to share stories I made based on characters that aren't mine.
For DC Characters, particularly the Teen Titans, I'm writing a story called Parallel Jigsaw; basically I'm treating all the existing stories like a puzzle, and alter it in order for it to fit.
I have used comics I owned, comic pages I found on the Internet, television based off of DC... and fanfic stories, as I figured since I'm not the only fan of these comics or cartoons, I didn't want only my ideas to make up the whole plot, so it shifts as I go along.
So what I want to ask is if I can use your Star/Rob stories in the mix - especially the E'ara Universe. I want your permission because I don't want to offend you in anyway. I always put disclaimers, citation, footnotes or endnotes because I'm not the type to take credit on other peoples work, nor do I plagiarize - it's against my morals. If you don't want me to, I'll understand and I can always change my thoughts for a different outcome.
I don't know how I'll receive your answer to this, maybe through an author's note or something.
P.S. If you say yes and if you want, I can make an exception and share what I got so far with you maybe through email or something and get some feedback, since I'm not the type to be international with a mere hobby I do for the fun of it.
| Faith-o-saurus chapter 11 . 1/13/2012
BB/STAR! You have me loving them, you do.
Brain/Slade? Hmm...I say go for it, hahaha.
| Diana chapter 11 . 1/13/2012
Can I request a RobStar one shot?
Your writing is really inspiring and amazing!
| Danielle chapter 11 . 1/13/2012
I think you did a really good with the story, even though it was about starfire and beast boy. I actually kinda like the story and starfire and beast boy are kinda cute together but I am 100% star/nightwing fans. Good Job Kryalla. Now you can make another Star/Nightwing story ! yeah
| Psych101 chapter 2 . 1/13/2012
I've only read the first two chapters, but I wanted to let you know:
Things I never thought about before: Starfire and Beast Boy together, how it feels to change into a fish, how it feels to generate a starbolt, and Beast Boy growing up.
You made all of the above very real for me. I loved it.
| SincerelyX O X O chapter 11 . 1/13/2012
Lol that's definitely a hammer. Well done. I've enjoyed this couple so much. Hopefully we can see more of this pairing in the future :)
| Gweargroal chapter 11 . 1/13/2012
I liked it. Interesting how everything end up, but I think that maybe there was too much questionning in the BB/Star relationship. Depends on how you see it I guess.
It was good, and I would love to see you write another couple that is not your usual ship.
Love your writting style,
| DrendeSalkash chapter 11 . 1/13/2012
mighty hammer has fallen...well, time to go reread it lol. great story, and a good ending to it. overall, this will be a classic in months to come