Reviews for Curse of Team Kakashi
Guest chapter 3 . 3/16
Huh. Anko has the same 'old style' as me. I have a friend, she's the median between my crush, with the whole,
"Person A likes Person B, Person B likes Person A, both Persons are shy and don't know if the other feels the same."
Thing.
But, I got a "INSERT NAME wants to know if you'll go out with him." Bad part? That was on Thursday. Why is that so bad? No School Friday, and then Spring Break, followed by teacher In Service on Monday. :P
Guest chapter 2 . 9/5/2014
please continue
Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
i wish you would continue this
HungryLemonGames chapter 3 . 7/18/2013
SasuSaku! Please don't let Sasuke fuck anyone but Sakura! Please! :D
webot chapter 3 . 8/26/2012
save kakashi every one else can die
Guest chapter 3 . 7/31/2012
Awesome porn book!
I love it!
DestroyerDRT chapter 2 . 7/4/2012
This is a very good start.
Master Dude the 21st chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
I have been looking forward to seeing this fanfiction, very well done! :D
KdaAnimefan chapter 3 . 1/6/2012
nice read, i have witty comments for the last question in bold, but enough for now,
The Digger chapter 3 . 1/6/2012
"Um... yeah, Taeko. There's probably something you should know about me..."

Oh, boy, that kid's in for one crazy night.

On another note, I think it would be better if you showed more clear divisions, (pagebreaks work best) for transitions from one scene to another. Other than that, I eagerly await ch4 XD
OGAFazer89AC chapter 3 . 1/6/2012
Cheeeee-.- I hoped till the end that Sakura's first time was with Ino... surely it would have been more interesting and less sad...

Good chapter anyway, Key's behavior always steals me a laugh.
sketchfan chapter 3 . 1/6/2012
this is...getting intriguingXD
pharaoh-90 chapter 3 . 1/5/2012
a paring between two of the most emotionally crippled people ive ever read, and you pull it off, masterfully, i might add.

and tentacle rape? havent seen that here before...tho i guess i shouldnt be surprised, considering just how common tentacle rape is in japanese hentai...and who you are.

cant wait to see how this goes over with everyone...
summerss chapter 2 . 1/5/2012
love the story.
The Digger chapter 2 . 1/4/2012
Oh, that's gonna be a tough thing to explain, no matter who it's to XD!

Anyway, I'm not usually much for tentacle anything, but you just make it work And I'm thinking (or rather hoping :P) that Anko and Kakashi would be next up for the tentacle super sex XP

I'm interested to see how this story unfolds
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