Reviews for Phases
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
Interesting and unique. I particularly like Jacob's reflections on his early teenage years and his efforts to get Bella to love him. That was very well written. The description of his imprint on Reneesmee was good. It is a hard concept to accept. He felt like he betrayed his people at first. The remainder of the story, all your own work, was very good also. Thank you for writing.
Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Nice story! Ending wasn't so good though, you should've concluded it with one of the teenagers - maybe newly phased? - mouthing off all disbelievingly, then Jake would hear it, walk down to the cliff and come up behind the guy, all quiet like... "Do I look like an illusion?!" - or something like that... :-P
sersmom chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
Interesting...I think you did a great job of capturing Jacob.

I like the way you described his thoughts about his youth. So often he is portrayed as a manipulator. He may have done that, but I always thought it was more just his way of dealing with feelings he was just too young and immature to understand.

I continue it enjoy your writing. Thanks
Angeldolphin01 chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
AAAWWW! I love it.