|Reviews for to have dreamed such great dreams|
| coeur de verre chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
I have no words to properly describe my feelings right now. This piece is amazing and so beautifully written. It's sexy in a classy sort of way and heartbreaking and dark all at once. There so much detailed imagery here but it's also open to interpretation. Fantastic job!
| thecivilunrest chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
/It is not just the part of her, however. There is many other parts, all forming a whole Rose. A Rose with thorns and a beautiful red flower that crawls down her back, blooming between her shoulder blades. A Rose with two elegantly spun stems. These parts that make a whole – they call out for his pollen. They call out nastily and crudely. She wants it so badly, that sometimes, her perfectly polished fingernails just fly into her mouth and she bites down. She gets out the polish, thinking of it's color. It is the color of pale pink, the soft tender pink of clean skin. She thinks that he has a similar tint to his skin, not too colored but not too pale. He is not his father, and she appreciates the distraction./
OH MY GOD HOW ARE YOU REAL. I don't even know how like. That is just so perfect. I love it. I love this. I love how there's no dialogue and yet it's still perfect. The reader is kept at a distance when it comes to the characterization, but I think that works here.
I really don't know what else to say lol other than this is PERFECT.
| LOLChanny819 chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
know what? I had no idea who this story was about and I was still captivated. That's the power of your writing, Cams. :) i absolutely LOVE your way with words. :) And my gosh, when did you start capitalizing? I miss your trademark, but I love this one too...I'm conflicted. Lovely story, Camelot.
Love from Saturn to Venus and you know I'll always mean it,
| past decembers chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
I loved everything about this piece.
The comparisons (personification, metaphors, similes, whatever they call them in English class) were absolutely amazing. I loved how you wrote this entire oneshot about how much Rose yearns for Scorpius, and the way you wrote it was just...perfect. xP