Reviews for Noel's Envy
AzureKate chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
that was awesome! ive only just recently gotten into noel x hope. this is my first fanfic :D nice job _...i HATE snow...
The Crystal Pen chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Awesome jealousy.
Kanekiller chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
No! D: *falls on Hands and knees* Noel I'm so sorry for you! :(

Awesome story though, I was sad at the end Noel
Baby-Ayatane chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
I like it! I really enjoyed it. Vague, but not in a way that was confusing or unenjoyable. I felt it was well written and smoith.

However, one thing that did confuse me was the POV. It kind of switched from present tense to 3rd person. It really helps to try and stick to one POV so you don't put people off of your works.

I hope I didn't offend!

Thanks for sharing this piece. :)
ben4kevin chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
please more noel/hope
G-AnakinRPG chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Nice little story :) I like it, it was cute!