|Reviews for After a Hundred Lifetimes|
| Mondhase chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Very interesting beginning so far. But what a horrible timing, Rohan, really?
I very much looking forward to the next chapter, but I have to agree with Anima that the time switches in your writing are somewhat irritating.
If you'd want me to, I could work as a beta for you, or you just ask a friend to look your story over before posting it.
But anyway, I can't wait to see how this continues.
| Anima of the lost chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
So, that was quite a nice start for the story, I really like it and I'm curious how you will go on (and hope for some Rohan-Deirdre romance, but I'll leave that to you). But I gotta say that your writing style might need a little improvement, you often change from one tense to another and that's a bit confusing - at least for me (usually you don't use presence in written stories except for direct speech). Ok, so I hope you won't take this criticism personally because I really want you to go on with your story!