Reviews for Revelations
gabelou1991 chapter 5 . 1/27
Saving People Slaying Things chapter 5 . 2/17/2013
So beautifully written! Amazing!
Cloudangel798 chapter 1 . 6/8/2002
hey melissa

I think that your whole story is really good keep it going! Your one awsome writer!



(Josh is hot and mean all at the same time)
Kristina Covey chapter 1 . 6/6/2002
Hey i think that your storys are great! And I Love You!he he Josh is hot! And he is mean!

Love you always

Cutie chapter 5 . 6/4/2002
I really like it. I just want to see it go farther and it needs more talking.
Katie and Falcon-Rider chapter 4 . 5/20/2002
who doesn't like it?

Let me at 'em!

heh heh, its good really! Do continue! Now I have to go get my tape ready to record Angel(he's gonna get stuck at he bottom of the ocean!*does a little dance*) B/S forever...
Aubrey chapter 3 . 5/20/2002
i loved it. i like the fact that your chapters arent long. i hate when a chapter is so long it can take me like two days to finish the story. i also like the way u explain things. i cant wait til the next chapter.
anon chapter 3 . 5/19/2002
I think you should just call it "Perfect" - adj. form of the word, not noun, and leave out the 'simply.'Good story. Keep going.
Jenny chapter 3 . 5/19/2002
Hey, I liied this story a lot. It's really sweet and made me feel better by reading it. You've done a good job. Hope you write more soon

SpikesPet chapter 3 . 5/19/2002
This is very well written (especially for the wee hours of the morning). You've done a great job of getting into the characters' minds. Despite the lack of dialog you've made a very interesting story that I look forward to reading more of!
CIE chapter 3 . 5/19/2002
I think it is a very sweet story
doesn't live here anymore chapter 3 . 5/19/2002
This is really, really good! Can't wait to read some more!
babyslayer13 chapter 2 . 5/17/2002
plz u need to make another chapter or i will really die!lolz u r doin a really great job keep it up
Terri chapter 2 . 5/13/2002
Thanks for writing.. Looking forward to more.
ozzy chapter 2 . 5/12/2002
amazing story

please write more and soo
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