Reviews for A New World
Manny McTurdeson chapter 9 . 6/18/2015
Why is Ash so unrealistically menacing towards Louise, Del, and Saito? If he was this hostile, I would've kicked the crap out of him...

With that being said, very interesting story! You cannot end this story right here!
Manny McTurdeson chapter 9 . 6/18/2015
Ash is one hell of a nosy prick!

Anyway, you need to continue this story! The current ending is highly unsatisfactory. It's been about two years...
Storylover Vodhr- Dux Ducis chapter 10 . 2/18/2015
Ummm. Is that it? No more?
F7 chapter 10 . 8/24/2014
purisu apudeto please update bitte update prosze update miham update onega!
Pandaemic chapter 6 . 1/19/2014
im just saying... 104 yen is 1 american dollar, so 80 Yen for anything, let alone a computer job is pretty damn good. I suggest you fix your monetary values
Sincerely The Sign Painter chapter 10 . 9/5/2013
This is an awesome story!
Sincerely The Sign Painter
Skylar chapter 10 . 8/24/2013
Please continue the story I like the story so far
Oh are saito and Louise married in this story?
Ulcaasi chapter 9 . 8/1/2013
Whether it's busy doing something or busy doing (-nothing,-)

(-her-) form sinking into the dirt to avoid the sharp blade.
logankyubi chapter 9 . 8/1/2013
This is a story that is awsome. Author you are the best at this keep doin more
logankyubi chapter 8 . 7/31/2013
Please do more i love it
logankyubi chapter 5 . 7/31/2013
I love the way you put a douche of a brother in this its really good
Cleo jones chapter 8 . 7/20/2013
Really good please write more i don't what to lose this story
MonkeyQueen88 YT chapter 8 . 7/18/2013
this is awesome please continue i love it even though you have not updated for 5 months

starburst98 chapter 8 . 4/2/2013
hmm... you have good writing and characterization. i am guessing the magic was shut down only temporarily from the transport. it needs to recharge is all. because his runes still worked when he stole the plane in the anime.

i am guessing the source of ash's anger/assholishness is jealousy. he was nice when he save louise because he doesn't hate everyone, but when he found out she got along with saito he got mad. saito has a parent that loves him, all he has is this asshole blob of a father. and now he is getting along with a cute girl. so while he isn't evil he puts saito down as the only way to get back at him for having things he wants.
chaos267 chapter 8 . 3/8/2013
Hhahaha now that was a good stopping point. Only thing i would like to know is were in the series are they for the timeline other then that it looks good im a little confused but very good and hope you contiue
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