Reviews for Eleven
CarinaMasonCullen chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Wow... I'm crying. That was beautiful, intense and so emotional. I feel so sad :(
Fleur50 chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
:o)
Ashley Mason aka Edwardslove13 chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Great story! Loved the original plot!
Thanks for sharing!
gfrankie chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
This story is well written, but I don't read stories with sad endings. There's enought sadness in this world. The story should have a character death warning.
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
This was dark, I liked it! I actually think this was kinda perfect in it's own way. This way they both find each other and recognize their love and she died happy.
TKegl chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Tragic and heartbreaking, but so beautifully written. Wonderful job!
emmzac chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Through my tears and can only say Beautiful but OH so sad. What a way to unite after eleven years- still so very much in love but the hurt and pain throughout the eleven years would be enough to grant any wish. And grant Bella's wishes is just what your Edward did. All of them. True love they say lasts forever and the 'sap' that I am can only hope they will be untied again. Thanks for sharing the this Sad but Beautiful story.
GuestRai chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
So sad :( :(
Bevey99 chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Wow, this really choked me up. Thanks for writing.
joayla chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Wow that was amazing a really interesting take on things xxxx
77Steph chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
I loved it and voted for it in the contest.
rubell chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
whoa...
lippylou chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Great story bb & beautifully written. I love the twist you've put on the story. I seem to have been reading a lot of stories lately that are NM variations, it's amazing how many different alternatives there are. I liked that you gave Edward an insight into Bella's mind right at the end, I'm not sure that he could have dealt with the guilt otherwise, no matter what Alice had told him.

Annette
lisamichelle17 chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Thank you so much BB for writing this story. It was so beautiful and I loved that it's AU. I'm not 100% sure if it's your first AU but was so happy to read it. A few of my thoughts:

1) I loved that the setting of this story was in NYC. Loved that and I know that you spent sometime there for your hubs birthday *winks*

2) I loved how Edward saw Bella again at JFK. He loves her even though it's been 11 years since he has seen her. His reaction to her blood was powerful. When Bella saw him rendered me speechless. She has missed him but we didn't realize what her ulterior motives has been.

3) So when Edward led her to his apartment in Manhattan, I had no doubt in my mind that he and Bella was going to make love to each other. No question in my mind. However, Bella made Edward work his ass hard at wanting her not only her blood. When they made love to each other was powerful, both times. I loved how Bella asked Edward to let her become a vampire. My heart broke when Edward drank too much of her blood but then you revealed what happened to Bella. My heart broke that Bella was forced to watch Charlie be tortured by Victoria and Riley. I like to think that Bella planned her death because Charlie did not have a choice at how he died. I do love that Bella's grave was left at Central Park. It's one of my favorite places in the world.

At the end you gave us chance at seeing Edward's death. He could not live without his Bella and I like to believe that he and Bella are walking around in a different dimension together. Most of all happy. This was beautiful and full of angst. Thank you for sharing this with us and know I look forward to whenever you have time to write Episode. Thank you, BB.
slc6548 chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
Great O/S - nicely written.
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