Reviews for Harry Potter Witch
suziq968 chapter 6 . 7/17
This was great! I usually have a problem with femHarry but you made it work. It was a believable scenario and a realistic way of dealing with it. You had good development of your characters and few typos. Most typos were missing words that were easy to fill in by context. Really, very enjoyable story.
M chapter 6 . 6/16
I was expecting a lot more angst, and some implication of possibly using those power-enhancement ritual that Harry knows about to maybe increase Ike's magical affinity. Was there a connection between Harry's sleazebag symposium stalkers and the kidnappers? (If there was, I missed it.) I would have expected, were this a more gritty story, for the kidnappers to have a better-executed escape plan, but the given plan fits with the average wizard's level of common sense.

There were some bits in which only dialogue is given without any descriptions of how it's given, in the early chapters mostly, and a couple daunting walls of text that could stand to be broken up.

Overall though, this was a remarkably focused story, and to me, it feels satisfyingly finished.
teedub chapter 6 . 3/15
I quite enjoyed this story. You took the time for Harry to adjust and process her life. I hope to read more. LOL, perhaps Jake being put in his place by Harry. He seems to have a large streak of arrogance.
beulah2013 chapter 5 . 1/21
Hi this is a review for the entire fic but because this is a reread I've already review the last chapter. So here are some new questions and comments that occurred to me : Thought Poppy wasn't allowed to practice before of th irregularities in her treatment of Harry? Also why would she go to her after it came to light she could/should've done something? Also why is it unlikely that Harry's children will be magical? Also do they for sure get together because it was unresolved last I read except for the assumptions made Ike's family - the issue aren't just gonna disappear because of the kidnapping, an event which is likely to happen again?
SkyDraconis chapter 1 . 12/9/2015
I have to admit, I love how much thought has gone into this story. My only problems would be how long you can make the paragraphs when you get into descriptions. Otherwise this is a lovely story and I'm absolutely delighted you posted it! 3 Lots of love, SkyDraconisxxx 3
Bronze chapter 6 . 11/29/2015
Talk about making a huge mistake in judgment! That idiot in the States obviously doesn't know shit about Harry Potter! Man, you did it to me again! I couldn't stop till I finished this. If you do post a sequel I hope it's as good as this! So I say to you, keep writing so I may keep reading!
Commander Riker chapter 6 . 10/6/2015
Loved this story! I was comfused I thought poppy got in trouble? Why did the call her?
HeartsGlow chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
Andie should know that Harry can go to a muggle surgeon and be turned back into a man
Noble Korhedron chapter 6 . 5/21/2015
V. interesting; I almost pity the idiots who kidnapped Teddy; it seems Dark Lords and stupidity go hand in hand...
Guest chapter 6 . 4/23/2015
It was cute, really enjoyed reading it :)
DGfleetfox chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
...BOO-YAH! Take that... great speech ; ) Marriage law fics are exasperating... too many.
Cristin Gryphon chapter 6 . 11/13/2014
Very nice, it was a pleasure to read.

Harry was very believably Harry, which I find is the main problem tat happens with female Harry stories. So often I see Harry become female and instantly become a submissive totally ooc personality normally paired with someone like Malfoy or Ron, if anything you took that idea and laughed it off with the ministry scene. Your Harry while still feminine also has distinctly Harry aspects as well.

Thank you for writing and sharing this, I'm not going to hope for a sequel or a response as you do not seem o have been active on the site for a couple years but feel free to surprise me. :)
flagirl91 chapter 6 . 11/4/2014
I see you have plans for a sequel and I am excited, I need to know what happens with Ike and Harry, oh and with Teddy!
Guest chapter 2 . 9/27/2014
What a sweet romance!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
Damn, that was a long chapter. Crazy premise, but well executed.
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