|Reviews for Ghost of Christmas Present|
| Rokimbo chapter 4 . 9/27/2014
A lovely story! Just a pleasure to read! :-)
| AnonymousLily chapter 4 . 5/6/2012
This follows seamlessly from the show, pretty much as we would have wanted. Great humor and flirting in the family around the table scene. You do great and with so many voices! Poor Carolyn, Candy, the captain, & Martha all ganging up on her. I could see it! I also liked her replies. I liked Carolyn's sensativity toward him, the man he'd been vs. now. It tickled me how he beat her to the marriage proposal! Martha meeting the captain was great, enjoyed her wit. Lovely story!