Reviews for Ghost of Christmas Present
eaz35173 chapter 4 . 10/20/2015
Great continuation of the episode! LOVED the first chapter with everyone around the table ... Carolyn squirming with the conversation, Candy's romantic notions, Martha playing into the whole thing unwittingly, the Captain's smugness. Wonderful!
Rokimbo chapter 4 . 9/27/2014
A lovely story! Just a pleasure to read! :-)
AnonymousLily chapter 4 . 5/6/2012
This follows seamlessly from the show, pretty much as we would have wanted. Great humor and flirting in the family around the table scene. You do great and with so many voices! Poor Carolyn, Candy, the captain, & Martha all ganging up on her. I could see it! I also liked her replies. I liked Carolyn's sensativity toward him, the man he'd been vs. now. It tickled me how he beat her to the marriage proposal! Martha meeting the captain was great, enjoyed her wit. Lovely story!