|Reviews for Imprint|
| Abandon All Sanity chapter 21 . 11/16
Well. I'm going to be completely honest, I loved it until she got pregnant. It wasn't the right timing at all to put a surprise pregnancy and then that we kill the baby and bring her back to life thing was just depressing and the governments methods were illogical and unrealistic. Plus everything just seemed rushed.
(dont rage at me just yet)
you did a FANTASTIC job with the first half of the story, everything was done perfectly in my opinion and I think that you have some amazing writing skills. I absolutely adore the whole imprinting thing because that really set it up and got it going before they were able to create the feelings for each other themselves and the fact that he actually understood love was amazing. You did a great job right there and I think with a little development this story could be absolutely spectacular. I'm not saying this out of "oh yeah im trying to be a bitch and i think i could have done it better" because theres no way on earth i could have done it even close to your level on the first half, i think there was just a little shift downhill with the second half.
| Abandon All Sanity chapter 20 . 11/16
Would you stop trying to kill her!
| Abandon All Sanity chapter 16 . 11/16
...idk its so fast
| Abandon All Sanity chapter 14 . 11/16
Noooooooo. Dont do it.
| Abandon All Sanity chapter 13 . 11/16
Wait Please tell me shes not going to have his baby in the next few chapters.
| Abandon All Sanity chapter 12 . 11/16
Oh my goodness. Theyre going to do the do?
| Abandon All Sanity chapter 11 . 11/16
that was literally my heart and brain when I read the second half of this chapter.
| Abandon All Sanity chapter 9 . 11/16
Oh. OH MAH GAWSH ITS HAPPENED THEYRE BACK TOGETHER AND I CANT BREATHE I DONT EVEN LIKE WHATS EVEN HAPPENING
| Abandon All Sanity chapter 8 . 11/16
Oh. OHHHH I SEE WHAT YOU'RE DOING!
You are a smart cookie.
| Abandon All Sanity chapter 7 . 11/16
Oh my dooh32fhrui43fh432
STOP IT WITH THE FEELS
NO NO NO
I CANT STOP THE FEELS
MY HEART IS LITERALLY DOING WEIRD SHIT IN MY CHEST BUT MY BRAIN IS TELLING IT TO SHUT UP BECAUSE THE GIRLS ELEVEN.
| Abandon All Sanity chapter 6 . 11/16
Everytime my heart pounds at the things that you write or the way you've written them and when I think you're an absolute genius for coming up with this and the way that you are able to describe what is becoming a couple I'm shipping
I just remember that she's eleven years old.
WHAT ARE YOU DOING
| Abandon All Sanity chapter 4 . 11/16
This is amazing so far. I wasn't planning on reviewing until the last chapter but I read that last sentence and I couldn't stop myself from laughing. How freaking weird would you have felt as the parents?
| CourtneyLove chapter 21 . 4/6
Please update this story. I really love it!
| mickey mouse17 chapter 21 . 6/16/2014
Oh come on. I know its been a long time but your story is super amazing. I LOVE it & it sucks that it just stops there. Do u think u could finish it...please pretty please.
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/21/2013
use "..." for talking instead of '...'