|Reviews for Let Him In|
| IhumakitukPeople chapter 20 . 10/10/2014
Why oh why did you leave it hanging? Just because it was getting good too. Oh well, all I can do now is hope you update this story and continue on ne?
| surban75 chapter 20 . 10/30/2013
Intriguing. What is to happen now? Please update soon.
| surban75 chapter 13 . 7/4/2013
I love the love hate relationship between Seph and Vincent. When Cloud told Seph that they could do anything he wanted and Seph piped up and wanted to kill Vincent. I laughed pretty hard at that.
I recently read another submissive Seph story and I have to say that I was disappointed. Although I wouldn't mind having Seph at my beckon call, the way he was portrayed in that story was simply way too submissive. It almost scarred me for life, but I recovered...barely.
Adding a little spice and attitude and with Cloud being possessive, but not overly so, makes a good submissive Seph story in my eyes. I think that is why I am enjoying this story so much. You have a good balance between Seph and Cloud. Niether one is disgustingly over the top in their roll. I also respect the fact that Cloud isn't clawing at the chance to have sex with Seph at this point. You show a good struggle in his mind of what he wants and what he feels is right.
Looking forward to reading more.
| surban75 chapter 4 . 7/2/2013
I have to say that I am very excited to see where this story goes. I like dependant and submissive Seph. That and after every thing that Cloud has been through, I have always pictured him as dominate. There are so few good stories with this concept and I appreciate this, and look forward to reading more.
| Hellysion chapter 18 . 4/5/2013
Nooooo, why did he wake up'? TT Sorry, I like to see Sephi suffering, but I have come to know thats normal with fangirls, hahahahaha. Absolutely loved this chapter!
| Hellysion chapter 11 . 4/5/2013
Oh gosh, oh gosh!
| Hellysion chapter 8 . 4/5/2013
Bad Cloud, bad Cloud! (giggles)
| Hellysion chapter 6 . 4/5/2013
Your Sephi is sooo lovelyyy! _ Thanks so much, you saved me the trouble of writing my own fic, hahahaha. Kudooos!
| Moreene chapter 20 . 12/11/2012
I read this story once and now Ive return to it. Really good and I hope one day maybe you will continue
| LazyLamia chapter 20 . 10/1/2012
Uh , I almost smell the stench of this blood in this chapter...I can't decide if I'm ready for more.
| LazyLamia chapter 19 . 10/1/2012
o Jenova tried to control Seph, but she expected resistance, didn't she? She faced Sephiroth - the general of the army, not some ordinary soldier - and I wonder if this frantic coupling afterwards was the show of Cloud's dominance but also prize for winning this round ;P
| Roaming Firefly chapter 20 . 8/7/2012
Sorry for the late review, been caught up in stuff, hehe P
Lots of stuff going on in this one. Punching and kicking and muscling their way into the mayor's mansion eh? Awwz, what happened to cross-dressing to infiltrate evil mini-bosses' mansions? D But then again, cross-dressing probably won't work as well here since they were infiltrating a HOUSE OF HORRORS O
Nice work building the eerie atmosphere. Nice use of the senses, describing the smell, the sight, and the feel (touch). Although somethings are setting off my inner science-nerd-sense, it's nothing major.
I call definite Jenova and Remnant connection for the mayor (Kill it with fire!) And I wonder where this Hana storyline's going to lead.
| geecee chapter 20 . 7/31/2012
Lol, nobody likes Cait Sith XD Can't say I like him either, but hey he did make amusing comments! XD
Love a bit of Cloud and Seph's fun moment before enter the 'haunted mansion' ;D Seph's eyes glowed in the dark, I thought, "Oh he's like a cat lol" (umm...does cat's eyes glow in the dark? Ee...not sure o_o).
I thought about 'is it okay to let Hana enter the building', then I read that Cloud thought alike (haha), and well... I think you have purpose to let her joined our heroes.
Good job in describing surrounding in this chapter, I got feeling like watching a horror game while reading. *chills*
Aaaanddd! Something absolutely wrong with . The 'Her' thing totally suspicious *shudder*
Thanks for the update, and I hope you also update Aesthetics soon ;)))
| avatarTingal chapter 20 . 7/29/2012
Oh hell! Looks like the mayor of Schönnbach is devoted to Jenova and tries to get her esteem by sacrifizing humans. I wonder how the other inhabitants of Schönnbach are invorlved. At this point, the story reminds me a bit on Steven King's "It".
| DarkBombayAngel chapter 20 . 7/28/2012
Like the chapter.