|Reviews for I Fall To Pieces|
| Guest chapter 23 . 2/23
I don't understand people like Alice. Even if Bella is her friend (like 5 minutes), Edward is still her brother. i don;t know how can Alice care more for her than him.
| A4frees chapter 47 . 12/18/2013
This was beautiful. As Edward said, I'd like to see this published one day.
| britnayc chapter 47 . 12/9/2013
Thanks for sharing such a great story. Amazing work.
| onlybelieved chapter 47 . 9/9/2013
I enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing :)
| Pannanarae19 chapter 47 . 7/27/2013
That was one of the most amazing fanfic stories I've read. Just fantastic. You are an excellent writer. :)
| dreamngo4it9 chapter 47 . 6/3/2013
i loved loved loved this epilogue! one of the best wrapping ups of a story i've ever read. i loved that edward was allowed to read her journals, and that she published her story. obviously, i also loved that they got married and are having kids. so sad to have this story ended, even coming back after all this time to review.
| Guest chapter 36 . 2/28/2013
Continuing on form my previous complaints: It's been established that she feels guilty for it seems practically everything. So do you really think its a good idea for her to sleep with him because she feels guilty for not telling him abt the session and to reassure his (and her) insecure ass about their relationship. I know the rationalization is that they love each other and trust each other (obviously not) so they can take this step. But it's really stupid and impulsive and if Edward is soooo concerned abt Bella he should stop. I know E doesn't mean to (I hope) but he emotionally manipulates her.
...Now I'm done.
| Guest chapter 36 . 2/28/2013
Congrats you have managed to make E an insecure jealous asshole. There are some things that are private and she shouldn't have to feel bad abt not sharing them. He expects her to tell him everything just like when he showed up and forced here to him her scars (which was disgusting and pushy IMO). Under the guise of being a 'nice guy' he has become emotionally manipulative. I don't like this E at all, it was good the first few chapters but his obsessiveness is not cute anymore.
With that I give up on this story.
| Guest chapter 18 . 2/28/2013
I hope Bella is 'allowed' to have other male friends besides Em and Jasper. Don't make E an overly possessive jealous asshole. I'm saying this bcos the guy they bumped into was probably Jacob and he already doesn't like him. Don't make their relationship an unhealthy one where her life is basically R, Em, J, A and Edward.
| Ness1956 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
| Melody chapter 47 . 2/9/2013
This story was very well done. I usually am in search mode on this site, looking for stories to hold my interest when I am out of new books to read. I however usually find that I lose interest by the halfway point in most stories. They are usually far too littered with errors in grammar and spelling, or they are just Edward swoonfests with a little plot thrown in here and there. This was a refreshingly witty and well developed read. Though there were a few grammar errors (mostly it seems, words just put out wrong in the haste of typing, obviously not intentional), this story was binding. I found myself looking forward to getting home from work every night the last week just so I could get time to read it. Well done!
| Sol Spell Diggory chapter 47 . 1/28/2013
Why the heck did it take me so much time to read this chapter, I don't know... Maybe I didn't want it to end so soon.
It was a great chap... a great ending.
Edward reading Bella's journals... I don't have words! I loved it!
Keep doing things like this!
You are great!
| divyvicki chapter 47 . 12/29/2012
This was a wonderful story. I'm so glad I read it.
| divyvicki chapter 44 . 12/29/2012
Boy, u really had me going for a while. I thought the whole story was a dream for a bit there. Lol
| divyvicki chapter 41 . 12/29/2012
So exciting. Great job.