|Reviews for Plaid|
| ScOut4It chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
I liked this bit of poetry:
/bucking her hips and trying to get more and get less, a mixture of want and hate and love and just too much too fast too soon too late./
This was apparently an excerpt of the story yet to be told? You hit the good part, and hint at the premise.
| Holly of the Night chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
The ironic part is these characters hardly moved at all in the entire story, yet so much is exchanged between them 0.0
Ella doing this out of anger, for Hattie's hypocrisy of Ella's life, maybe?
Hattie, doing this because it excites her, even willing to be on dirt in the middle of daytime... Ella's got some powerful seduction techniques D