|Reviews for Humbert does laundry|
| thehummingbear chapter 1 . 1/29
Now THIS was really good. Another one I just read was too purply, but this one has just enough (Maybe not enough? Perhaps a few mental tangents to add here and there-like Hum often did in the midst of a thought,with dashes-might be a welcome addition.) to keep it from going overboard. I do love it, and can see it as an excerpt from the book.
| PurplePersimmon chapter 1 . 1/10
Beautifully written and told, I can hear Humberts voice ringing through...
| SnuggleKitten69 chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Very nicely done. Your prose is elegant and in the style of the original author, with just a dash of American flare.
| MiyukiShinodaMindFreak chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
A little bit too short for me but it was a good read.
| KatFisch chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Very sweet and your writing sounds just like him. Nice job!
| mudpuddledemon chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Awesome. Really well done. Love the bit of ordinary made beautiful. And the end about illicit soapbox babies. ; )
| catoglossmarvelfinnick chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Wow you really captured his writing style well.
| SIREV chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Oh, I really liked this. You know how to continue with the story and it's a nice, refreshing view of how they'd have continued with their lifes. And the child! Nice touch introducing a new nymphet! Seems like Hum is never going to get used to them.
| Madame Apathy chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
You've done a brilliant job of capturing Humbert's voice in this, and you've kept Lolita in character. Your vocabulary is also brilliant, and you've caught Nabokov's sense of humour beautifully.
| Limerence chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Ah, beautiful! You've really captured something of Nabokov's humour and the hopeless, devoted manner of Humbert's passion. I particularly liked the clothes representing the locations of previous trysts. Great job!