|Reviews for Revisions|
| Aleine Skyfire chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
...golly, girl, you just can't escape this crossover-verse, can you? _ Never mind, it was fun!
Although. (Yes, here comes the critique part.) I wouldn't say that the characters themselves were necessarily OOC (although Jeremy perhaps felt a little too... happy?... in the second scene), but this little story unfortunately had the feel of having been written in about fifteen minutes. And you have done other shorts that certainly did not feel rushed.
So! What would help? Well, I would say: tell us what that script revision was. Which episode? Why didn't Holmes like it, and why was Jeremy being secretive in the first place? If you give this a little effort, you might end up with this story as one of your better one-shots. Please, give it a go!
(Regardless, I still enjoyed this, and it's great to see you back in the fandom!)