|Reviews for Michelle and Jesse's love problems|
| TolkienGeek1 chapter 1 . 2/23
I'm sorry, I couldn't finish this. Your grammar and spelling was appalling. Don't take this as hateful, I just want to let you know so you can fix it and be better. :)
| Kaylee chapter 4 . 8/22/2013
Nice job please update soon :).
| MakorraLove97 chapter 3 . 6/26/2013
Love it! You should continue, I hope you do, great job! :D
| sara menseses chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
hi full house dj jesse backy danny joey alex niki
| MakorraLove97 chapter 4 . 4/19/2013
Love it, please write more! :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
you really need a beta
| dancing-mellarkable chapter 4 . 1/3/2013
| TheMotorcycleBoyReigns chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
you captured them all so well espically Michelle
| heather chapter 4 . 11/5/2012
kinda cliffhangery awesome i love it:)!
| Colorful Rainfall chapter 4 . 11/5/2012
Great chapter :) update
| Claire chapter 3 . 7/28/2012
I'm sorry, but you are too choppy. Just focus on one thing each chapter, and try POV's.
| CocoRocks chapter 2 . 2/5/2012
update. this is amazing and funny.
| Ihavealife2uknow chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Well the storyline isn't bad, but your spelling makes it hard to read. You use "yer" a lot, but I'm not sure what that's supposed to be. "Nikki" is supposed to be "Nicky" (your way of spelling it is a females name).
| Sailor Pluto chapter 2 . 1/18/2012
Hmmm...amusing i guesss but you need to fix your chapterr mix up. I can tell your a brand new author so i will be nice to you. I wish you all the best and don't worry coz yyoouu
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| wildfirefanatic08 chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Wow - And not in a good way. First off, learn how to write better. This sucks. Being honest. Second, please learn how to use things like puncuation. Message me if you need help - which believe me, you do.