Reviews for Your First and Your Last
Sexytunafish chapter 3 . 7/2/2014
Let me just say holy god I'm horny
Impala Baby chapter 3 . 6/24/2014
Awww this is amazing! The perfect mix of sexy hotness and fluff! Thank you so much for writing this, your honestly such a fantastic writer! :) xx
Anonymoustache chapter 3 . 7/6/2013
I loved this fic so's amazing!
ThisDayWillPass chapter 3 . 9/15/2012
Loved it. Really lovely
forgetmenotjimmy chapter 3 . 5/4/2012
Nice little fic, written very well, nice one!

Silverspeare chapter 3 . 3/13/2012
Normally i'm not really into fanfics where John and Sherlock is having sex, but you have managed to make this such a lovely story. This story is not about sex, not at all, it's about making love with somebody you love. It's so touching and well written.

You are such a talented author! I love your stories, and this one is my favorite so far :)
sami1010220 chapter 3 . 3/9/2012
aww, cute! it would've been really interesting to see what would happen as the story progressed, as in the actual episode. irene was all kinds of flirty with sherlock, and with him and john just starting a relationship, it would've been sooooo fun to read! anyway, again, good job! :)
loverofbooks4eva chapter 3 . 1/25/2012
Is this not over? Because I love it. A lot. And I'll be looking out for more.
jboogie6067 chapter 3 . 1/24/2012
so much lovely fluff 3 i got my wisdom teeth out this morning and have been reading fluff all day! its made me feel so much better, and yours was just fantastic! :D
highlyfunctioningmikyla chapter 3 . 1/22/2012
This is actually really sweet! You captured Sherlock's fear and uncertainty very well. Well done!
NivalKenival chapter 3 . 1/17/2012
Loopylucymac chapter 3 . 1/14/2012
this is story is beautiful please keep going i love it and you r a great writer hunni xxxx
emma de los nardos chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
Oooh! Virgin Sherlock!

I love how you described Sherlock's hesitation and uncertainty, as well as John's reassurance and love. Oh, if only we all had such considerate partners for our first times!

PhrasesForTheYoung chapter 3 . 1/13/2012
Awh seriously adorable.
MrsCumberbatch chapter 3 . 1/13/2012
When two of the best friends in the world become lovers, it can lead to many complications, and John was afraid he would push the other man too far and hurt him or drive him away. Sherlock, for his part, was just afraid of losing John. If he lost John, what was the point? John was The One, if Sherlock lost him, he could never live with himself.

Awwwww that line was my favourite!

First, I loved the fact that Sherlock took his time for his second time haha! The scene had an awkwarness that you described perfectly! The tension of the moment was excellent too.

And John, being so careful at the beginning and then losing control over Sherlock was... Omg that scene was AMAZING and so HOT! And then, when John says 'Sherlock you are bleeding!' I was drinking tea with my mum and I almost chocked on it and she said 'what is it?' And I wanted to tell her 'Sherlock's bleeding!' Hahaahahahahhaha.

Then Mycroft has such a timing! And his comment 'if you ever hurt my brother...' Omg Mycroft he already did that.

And Sherlock feeling sore, you poor little thing!

I loved this - I loved this - I loved this - I loved this - I loved this -

Is this the end? Noooooo! Haha!

Well done! x
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