Reviews for Between Two Fires REVISITED
mithras90 chapter 3 . 7/28/2014
You have to continue this, you have to!
lily anson chapter 3 . 2/20/2014
holy crap! I need more... Please continue this...
Saissa chapter 3 . 3/3/2012
I'd like to see where this goes - especially if Murdoc and Mac meet up again.

Any chance you plan to continue this?
whaledreams chapter 3 . 2/3/2012
This is terrific! I love how it's not another Murdoc finds Mac story... but a Murdoc slithering his way in to vulnerable people. The fact that he keeps missing Mac physically is great... you're playing that part very well. I can relate to your main character Phoenix - her feelings about her loneliness and lack of friends are very straight to the core.

Please continue writing! :)
kittn chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
Uh oh... A very dangerous last paragraph. I look forward to reading more!