|Reviews for Beautiful Pain|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/29
That was BEAUTIFUL! Oh my gosh. That is how it should be. Perfect. Words cannot describe. Wow. I actually wish it ended this way. BBC should take some advice from you! Congratulations, and well done!
| MerlinMorgana1579 chapter 1 . 4/3
I'm very emotional when I'm sleepy. Very. I can easily cry and I guarantee this fic is def tear worthy. Thankfully, I'm not sleepy right now...
But God... Sleepy or not the 'Be at Peace'... That's what Merlin said when arthur died as merlin pushed him away, except in old english...
God why?! How could you! Ugh...
| Obscured Angel chapter 1 . 3/7
Thanks for writing and posting, it's appreciated.
| BreathingMagic chapter 1 . 2/9
*Shatter* You hear that? Yeah, necermind, that's just my heart... But honestly? This would have made a lot more sense destinywise. Merlin made Arthur the man and great king that he was and with his, it would have been thabks to Merlin that he finally would have brought magic back and unite the land of Albion, like we were led to believe was his destiny from the very first episode onwards. I don't think they ever said anything about Arthur dying before he even considered changing the law about magic, and that's certainly not the outcome Merlin basically gave his life for to achieve. So yes, this fic made a lot of sense, heartbreaking and beautiful as it was. It wouldn't have ruined my Christmas eve any less though, to see my beloved warlock die... However, brilliant piece of work and thank you for sharing!
| too-much-inspiration chapter 1 . 1/27
A bit of a classic cliche for death one-shots, but nicely done none-the-less. Thank you for posting!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
This is a wonderful fanfic, I loved it very much, and may have caused some tears to be ahead on my part. Thank you
| Meega-Nala-Kweesta chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
You say you may or may not have cried while writing this, but I can tell you that I DEFINITELY cried while reading it! This was beautiful, and while I'm glad Merlin gets to see Freya again, my heart is aching for poor Arthur. He's been left without his other half, and I don't even want to begin to know what that would be like for him :'(
| totalclutz chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
you made me cry. This is amazing. Thank you for posting it.
| WhatIsThisNormalYouSpeakOf chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Oh. So beautiful. Thank you.
| Cahaya Sidur chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
Happy ending…Freya and Merlin together again…loved it! :)
| nerdgirl11 chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
| Mishka chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
I have read many death fics, over a hundred, and only about ten of them have made me cry for ages afterwards. I read this an hour before writing this review, and I'm still crying. This fic broke my heart, it was so beautiful. I'm glad that Merlin is with Freya again, and the only thing that makes this better is that I am sure Arthur will join them eventually. Thank you for writing this 3
| ciara chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
I am sobbing he sees freya again
| Time Lady Evangeline chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Wow okay... thanks for the tears (literally) I don't think there's any way this could have been more perfect. "Be at peace." DEAR GOD IT HURTS SO MUCH. Wow I'm going to reread this now. Wow. Just, wow. That was incredible. Thanks for writing!