|Reviews for Noah's Shadow|
| chiakidono chapter 3 . 2/9/2012
Great story about Cross,Earl,Neah and Road! Your story is full of descriptions about things, which amazed me! Please do continue with this story because i wanted to see what Neah will do after waking up :)
Also, finally i get to read some good NeahxRoad fanfics which are difficult to search
So please continue the story and good luck! :D
| ShortMcCake chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
your prologue... Was just amazing!
| Annie Sixx chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Alright, here it goes. This is going to be short and get to the point.
I like the prologue, I know it's supposed to be short and not tell too much, without leaving a bunch out, but we can still be descriptive about everything else. You could have described the view a bit better. Like, at the grave scene, was it just that, just on them, or were their woods around them? Or was it a meadow? Get what I'm saying?
And when you say a star appeared on his head and the name. Was it sketched into his head? Like etched in their? Or just like, written on their almost? What color was it? Was the skeletons skin pure white, was it stained yellow? I just wanted to know a bit more.
Other than that I love this. Can't wait to read more. (and going to xD)