|Reviews for pathetic pleas fell to the floor|
| livinthelife321 chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Why is this so perfect and amazing? You posted this so long ago, I don't even know whether you'll see my review...so I won't even try to give it substance.
Let me just sit in my chair trying to pick up the shattered pieces of my heart. Oh my gosh...we didn't even know why...she was leaving him...but she was...and Bori is actually my favorite couple...and this is actually the best thing ever...and...oh my gosh...I don't even know what to say...oh my gosh.
Great job! I really loved it!
| utterlyheartbroken chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
this killed me.
but it was, just so very beautiful.
i love it, very much!
| Explicitly Simple chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
What a sad love story, too bad Tori left :/
| elinashine chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
wow! this is like the best story with a sad end of those two...:)
| seemslikeaporno chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
LARA. WHY DO YOU FEEL THE NEED TO DO THIS TO MY HEART. WHY.
This is a very poignant story. It feels distant and as though I'm watching this through a window. It's concise yet scattered, and her steadfast decision with the remnants of doubt and hope still in the back of her mind really leaves an ache in my chest. It is a very, very beautiful story. You have such a way with words - all of your stories are very poetic, and this one, despite it's less vague nature, is no exception.
The style is different from other things I've read from you, but I have to say I enjoy it, and the story feels very real although it is a story that isn't often told. Her asking if he'd marry her at the end and then leaving as he goes to get the ring is both heartbreaking and uplifting; her courage for breaking a harmful cycle of a relationship is nice, even if she knows it breaks both of their hearts.
I also like that it is slightly open-ended, and that the reader is left to assume what both of them do with their separate lives after she leaves. The "imaginary world" lines are very symbolic, and her exiting the world inside of those walls is actually really lovely; she's like a bird escaping a cage.
Overall it is a very gorgeous piece, and I really enjoyed it, despite the ache in my heart. I also listened to the song "Maps" as I was reading, and the tone felt perfect, so, yes, it's a very good song to be inspired by.
- Lahv, Emma.
(I tried to give my review actual substance did it work?)
| becksgirl chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Really cool and different, although quiet sad at the end but touching at the same time . I liked it, it was something different and unique. Thank you for sharing it. Have u considered a multichapter story? If not pls do!
-becksgirl out ;]
| Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
i dont get this
| CatHeartsU chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
You should continue it with that angsty feel to it will get everybody wanting to read it! Please continue!:)
~Caterina!:) (call me Cat!:))