Reviews for Jackrabbit Heartbeat
AdoAnnieCarnes chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Gorgeous. The whole thing was so, so poetic and honest, I loved it. I particularly love the line about being "painfully, painfully human", and the confessions that lodged themselves in his throat "and strangled him there." Beautifully done! Gah, I just can't get over it. And if you like Ilse, I'd really value your opinion on my story called Pieces. I think you do an amazing job of writing SA and capturing the tone and the tragedy of everything.
Megatha chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
I really like this story :) It's different then other ones I have read in that when it comes to Melchior and Moritz, Moritz is usually the one talking about Melchior but in this one it's the other way around and I really liked that. Also that you italicized all the hes and hims for Moritz to help distinguish the characters without using any names. Continue writing! :)