Reviews for The Request |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this story and probably the only thing i didn't like is the way Anya and James decided to elope. And the fact that Ginny is written as being over dramatic when she feels betrayed because of this. This was incredibly selfish of them and to keep it secret for 3 years was just them being cowards and they probably would've never said a thing if he hadn't knocked her up. once again, i love this story. even if its not britpicked its good. there are some inconsistencies with the plot. all in all a good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a wonderful story! I'm so glad it was recommended to me. |
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![]() ![]() Woooow me encantó |
![]() ![]() This story needs some serious editing. It's a lovely story that's filled with inconsistencies. Just one small example is how Draco looks over at Anya and the a couple of paragraphs later you mention that Anya appears with Claire and Katie. There are countless instances like this throughout the story and I feel like just one thorough edit would make what's already a good story pretty great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a beautiful story! It definitely up there as one of my absolutely favorites. Everything was amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, this is heart wrenching. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh can’t believe this is over now! I really enjoyed this story and I’m so glad to have found one that focuses on dramiones kids and not just 95% of the story being their slow burn of getting together. Huge fan of your writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a beautiful journey to go onI can’t believe it’s done! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loveeee this type of domestic fic! I need more pls |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Anya can just give a simple “I’m sorry” but Ginny has to go through the ringer? What Anya did was worse and Hermione is feeling insecure but that doesn’t mean Ginny has much to be sorry for. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Anya and James are more focused on how their feelings are hurt by Ginny and Claire and don’t seem to care at all that they kept their marriage hidden for THREE YEARS. Frankly, that was childish. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story very much enjoy it. continuity issue, Hogwarts a history hasn't been updated since Bathilda Bagshot,. it's an honor for Hermione to be chosen. Therefore, Hogwarts a history can't know about Dumbledore's Army. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ughhhh such a good fic. Thank you SO much. I’m normally more of a war-time fic kind of girl but this grabbed me from the first chapter. I loved your characterizations of all the children and was actually excited whenever it focused on any of them. Again, much appreciated |