Reviews for The Request
Guest chapter 1 . 1/23
Why is this soo American? Decent story but a lot of the stuff you mentioned is not at all British. And this is the first chapter lol
Guest chapter 1 . 1/23
I really wanted to read this , as it was highly recommended, but the lack of constellation names and the fact that it's not brit-picked turned me off
khayla.mancaorondobio chapter 39 . 1/21
I just spent 3 days reading this beautifully written piece. You got the best of my emotions from laughing, crying. This really was a very heartwarming piece. Will be one of my faves! Thank you for this
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17
Absolutely love this story, love all the familiar fanfic tropes but with your own unique twist, love the characters, love your writing it brings so much joy and especially love how it just keeps going.
Craft Rose chapter 25 . 12/3/2021
This is some awful trash!
You fall heavily into fanon traps of Draco being Snape's godson (he's not), Lucius being a lord (he's not), Daphne being blond (girl 'identified' in DH film is not Daphne according to JKR) & marriage bonds not being permanent (never specified).
Have you actually read any of the books or just basing this on down market fics written by teenage American girls?
Pranavi chapter 39 . 11/19/2021
Very good story.
oliviagrace09 chapter 30 . 11/13/2021
I don’t like how much Draco’s emotions are being downplayed. Yes we know how much Hermione loves Draco but that boy grew up with superficial love he isn’t used to this. And every time they argue he yells, she yells and then she storms out and just ignores him. When the argument is usually about how he feels he isn’t good enough for her and that she’ll leave him. And she just leaves. She may not leave leave but she storms out leaving him standing there having to deal with that. Then he has to earn her apology like she didn’t do anything wrong either. But she rarely apologizes. I just don’t understand…anyways this is a great story I love it lol
Happy chapter 39 . 11/7/2021
I just Re-Re-read this beautiful beast. Sigh. What an amazing story! I’m several years older than my first read, and I cried at some parts for the first time. And I had a Really different reaction to the A/J secret marriage. I’d already “sided with them” in my earlier readings. This time I really felt and grieved for the loss of missing out on the wedding on behalf of the parents & siblings. I don’t blame Ginny one bit, even tho I understand their sound choice. But now I feel that marriage is a social contract made before God and loved ones in a public way. And they absolutely denied their family of the joy and honor of it. So, that new reaction of mine really shocked me. Perhaps it’s because I’ve been watching Dr. Jordan Peterson lectures. And I love that you didn’t quit at chapter 25. The couple “finally getting together “ isn’t the end, it’s the beginning. Look at their continuing life adventures! I cannot thank you enough for the beautiful diversion and relationship modeling. Loved it (again) - perhaps my fourth read in 7 years.
Guest chapter 39 . 10/30/2021
This is a great story and I really appreciate the time that went into the “filler” chapters. They filled out the story beautifully!
Guest chapter 39 . 10/23/2021
This is one of my most favorite reads I’ve come across. I loved everything about this. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story!
Lindy Rose chapter 39 . 10/6/2021
I loved this entire story. Everything about it. I loved the sweet moments of family life interspersed between family drama. I loved Hermione and Draco's love story. I love the highlighting of Richard and Jeans characters. I love that there were realistic Weasley criticisms but not bashing. I loved all the kid moments and that you showed things from Claire and Anya's perspectives. I love how you see both girls find their own love and mature as people. I loved the dream with Astoria in it and that she watches her children in her happy place. I love the time transition you did so we could see how the family dynamic developed. I loved all of it it was amazing and one of my favorite Dramione's ever. Wonderful, beautiful, emotional work.
setayeshtlb chapter 11 . 10/5/2021
literally every chapter I'm like I'll have self control I won't cry this time and evertime I am and the big thing hasn't even happened yet
RavenclawsLostNiffler chapter 37 . 10/2/2021
Oh boy was that intense!
spikeslovely chapter 7 . 9/26/2021
Usually when a story is complete I wait to review until the last chapter, but I am enjoying this story so much I just had to do it right away! I particularly enjoy how you are very skilled in evoking vivid imagery
Guest chapter 39 . 9/14/2021
So good, this is my new comfort book :)
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