Reviews for The Request |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. |
![]() ![]() I am intrigued! Very interesting concept! Can't wait to see how their relationship develops! Update soon! (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so sad...but I really, really like it. You did a brilliant job writing it! |
![]() ![]() By "peaks your interest," you mean get us totally hooked right...because I definitely am! What a different concept and I too wonder how you're adding another great story in the mix! As always, you are excellent at conveying the emotions and dynamics of characters. Your writing is top-notch and very clear yet flows very nicely with flashbacks and the present. Oh I feel for Astoria and Draco and the kids! :( I'm interested in how Draco and Hermione's friendship actually progressed (since he clearly trusts her immensely to have her watch his children). And also because of this line: "While her name alone was a main source of tension during their marriage, Astoria knew that indirectly, Hermione made her husband a better person." -Why would she be a reason for tension? Interesting Whether this is a "short" or novel-long story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter of this and your other two! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. Update asappp! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am loving this story and concept! I have one small request... Add another chapter or 12 or so ) I am anxiously waiting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why must you punish me by writing new stories that I keep wanting to click next chapter lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, great start and concept. Is this going to be a relatively "short" story or do you plan on making this as long as "Its all uncharted"? Because I don't know where you are going to find the energy and time to work on all three stories you have now! Looking forward to the next installment. |