Reviews for Flame and Fortitude
RLS legacy chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Very well written but... *chuckle* Well, I can't really imagine Ghirahim reading human literature, let alone a romance novel. :J
Running Ninja chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Oh yeah! Go Link!
I really loved the line "the sound of bells fills the air and bunnies prance about and everything is just sunshine and rainbows!" Heehee I had to laugh at Ghirahim's frustration, though there was still a definite sense of tension carried throughout the story. All in all it was awesome, amazing, and you write like a boss. But you don't write like Ghirahim, even if he is the boss of the Fire Sanctuary.
Kieran-Prince chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
I'd have to say that my favorite part of your story is the dialogue. You captured Link and Ghirahim perfectly (even though the fangirl inside of my wanted Link and Ghirahim together). But I can push my fangirl away to appreciate a good story when I read it.

I actually agree with Ghirahim when he calls Link a cockroach. He really doesn't die. He just keeps coming back, even when stupid idiots like me jump off bridges and ledges in the game...

Lovely job with this story :)
Snappy Awesome chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
I really enjoyed reading this. Also, I have to compliment you on the way you portray Ghirahim. In my opinion, he's one of the most difficult characters in the game to depict, what with his crazy personality and "mood swings" if we can even call them that. Nonetheless, you did an amazing job on keeping him in character. It's so refreshing to read a good fic revolving around Ghirahim that isn't absolutely ridiculous.
Silvara chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
As I said back on A3O, this story is for me the first time I see a use to Ghirahim's exagerated character. Not too bad as a side kick, really.

Bold spicy humor is spicy bold!
ReverseQueen chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Wow, this is awesome! And also very cute 3 AND NO SPELLING MISTAKES, HALLELUJAH!

Yay!

Love, ReverseQueen xxx
Verunme chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Fantastic story!

I love the idea of demons actually not understanding, or feeling in any way, something that is so important as love. I think you perfectly showed Link's real reason to fight.
Rainmy chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
haha guess the mind attact was a failure eh? I liked him seeing link this way,most write him weak
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Good work
Cherie R. Lynn chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Your writing style is very captivating! The descriptions easily created picture-esque scenes in my mind without becoming flowery or overwritten, and emphasis you put on certain words and phrases really drove the point home and made it easier to hear the speakers in both the narration and dialogue.

Great job! I look forward to reading more from you.
Deanna.Price chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Wonderful! I really enjoyed it. _