|Reviews for The Way The Cookie Crumbles|
| rnairs1989 chapter 1 . 6/29
I'm not sure if you're still looking for feedback or not but I would love to see a full story for these two. I love how you've written the chemistry.
| Dorktress chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
I love, love, love this series! It is by far my favorite Stephen story. I think you wrote him perfectly. It is so well written, it made it that much more enjoyable. I know I would be thrilled if you were to write a multi-chapter piece with these two!
| ThatGirl54 chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
I've always loved this oneshot series :) Perfect writing! Love the relationship between them, I'd definitely read a story with them! :)
| PreciousKat chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
I would most definitely like to see a full story featuring Caoimhe and Stephen/Sheamus. I love the pairing of these two. Great job with the series so far! :)
| xLou26 chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Gah! Well that was just a whirlwind of emotions from start to finish! Loved that Stephen was there for her and asked her to move in :'), so damn cute! And naked Ste at the end.. What a wonderful thought! Lovely story Karen :)! Lavyouuuu xxxx
| WhatImZayn chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
I think you should write a full story with Caoimhe and Stephen just gonna put that out there.
Great story lady.
I feel so bad for her. She lost her bakery and all that money that she put into it. And I love that Stephen asked her to move in with him. I love how nervous he seemed when asking her to move in.
I really really enjoyed this and like I said, I'd love a full story featuring the two. 3
| ResplendentAnarchist chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
I can't imagine how it would feel to have everything you worked so hard for just tugged from under you over something that could have been prevented, but how you wrote Caoimhe's devastation at losing the bakery to a fire gave me a pretty good idea. Her displaced anger towards Olly, her spontaneous trip to Florida to sobbing into Stephen's arms - great show of emotions to describe the turmoil that she was going through.
And awh Ste, y u so cute? Being scared of asking her to move in and talking about getting fat. :')
I'd say yes to making a longer story for these two. But I know you have a lot on your plate so... If or when you can manage, then go for it. :P