Reviews for The Number 1 Hyperactive, Knucklehead Master |
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Guesto chapter 25 . 12/14/2019 Jiraiya better fight as nerfed as he did when he was a good guy or else it will be some bs. Haven't been complaining about how these 2 ninja should be shitting on everyone and most of their Pokemon. Even Naruto has been holding back on spamming his thousands of clones and only taking out a dozen at most it seems. |
guest chapter 23 . 12/10/2019 good chapter. find myself skipping the silver parts tho, glad it was short this time lol. nothing against it but more interested in the naruto pov than perv and silver. would be funny to see the master ball used on a regular pokemon in true naruto fashion lol |
Jin chapter 21 . 12/9/2019 I wanna see Naruto use the master ball on a Random Pokemon so it can't be used again since it would be weak for anyone to control the legendaries with op chear ball |
Toffeecat15 chapter 21 . 12/9/2019 God dammit Karen, attacking the protagonists out of the blue like that |
Toffeecat15 chapter 9 . 12/8/2019 Naruto's Obi-wan impression didn't go down so well with Janine |
GeneralFang2010 chapter 29 . 11/23/2019 When I saw there was an update for this story I had to go back and reread it. Every time I do that for one of you stories I start rolling from the amount of TFS references you make in them. Still a fan of your writing style, good chapter my dude. Looking forward to more when you get around to it. |
TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 29 . 11/14/2019 They are now bestest buddies. Naruto will teach him the fun song and they sing and laugh and dance together. And then Suicune will swing by to visit its sibling and they have a family picnic. Then Eusine will wake up drenched in terror sweat clutching his Suicune hugging pillow. |
TheSummerSet chapter 29 . 11/12/2019 Dude I binged your story in a week and it is my shit. You deliver the best stories and I can't wait for an update. |
J chapter 1 . 11/10/2019 New chapter YES! |
Jack Inqu chapter 29 . 11/6/2019 As usual, Naruto is right in the middle of big mess, with people wanting to kill him for stupid reasons, good friends at his side, and an ally being brainwashed. This should be fun. Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update. |
TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 26 . 11/5/2019 Hah gotteem. |
cougarkillz chapter 29 . 11/5/2019 I freakin love this story. I just read it all the way up to chapter 29 and I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Keep up the awesome crossover work! |
Oblivious IJ chapter 12 . 11/2/2019 No imperfect sage mode for you~ Ofcourse all Jiraiya's Pokemon are female -_- I swear if I see a Gardevoir... IJ the oblivious one |
woodxvii chapter 29 . 11/2/2019 I love the idea of naruto just shoving his face into a legendary's. Also really enjoying the growing relationship between he and Janine |
Kyo no Kitsune chapter 27 . 10/31/2019 This chapter REALLY displays one of my biggest gripes with your fanfiction. I like it for the most part, but this issue really shows it’s head frequently, in your stories especially. The Rasengan is not a “glorified super punch”. It never does anything in your stories which is outright ridiculous. Who gives a fuck if its scales are tougher than steel, a regular size, non kyuubi enhanced rasengan completely blew out a massive and thick walled steel watertank. For one, it’s not even meant to have explosive force until after it has already ground into its target a bit. So a technique that can quite easily obliterate a massive steel tank, buffed up to like three times its size, and made more potent per area with kyuubi enhancement, and it does literally jack shit against a creature whose scales are definitely not a foot thick, and are only described as “stronger than steel” and not anything like “MUCH stronger” or “multiple times stronger”. Just to add tension in a story a literal A rank technique is turned into a slightly stronger punch. It’s ridiculous. Just ridiculous and honestly annoying. |