|Reviews for Elizium for the Sleepless Souls|
| alice22 chapter 8 . 3/2
Well this was interesting.
Was HArry escaping from a dementors kiss?
Well can't wait to read the epilogue.
| lovemya2000 chapter 8 . 2/8
| BajaB chapter 1 . 2/4
Not sure what happened to my notifications for me to miss this until now. good stuff.
| livin and breathin chapter 8 . 2/2
Hey! It's been a while since I've reacquainted myself with an HP fanfic but I'm enjoying reading this again- I'd like to know the ending! It's an intriguing plot and well-written so thank you for the ride.
| Klocksworth chapter 1 . 1/27
Everything up to chapter eight is mind blowing. I was like, "How does someone come up with this idea?". Had to listen to dark ambient music while reading this, got the mood more prevalent.
| spenny chapter 8 . 1/27
Poor Dolohov, I liked him in this. Can't wait to see what the time delayed memory shows. I am so glad you're back. I can't wait to read the epilogue.
| Sable1212 chapter 8 . 1/26
Cool man, great to see you updating. :)
| Magda the Magpie chapter 4 . 1/25
I hope to read the epilogue soon, and I'm a bit sad that'll end the story as I'd love to see this Harry striving in a ministry-controlled, nightmarish-1984 kind of world.
Your writing was awesome, you always took me exactly where you wanted to take your readers. I was mislead every step of the way! I even felt bad for suspecting Marie.
And you managed to make me like Dolohov, which is quite a feat. I admit I was even rooting for his escape. But the way he went... I almost shed a tear. It was a it cliché but beautiful nonetheless. You have a real talent for making your readers care for your characters.
I'll be awaiting your update eagerly!
| Miner603 chapter 8 . 1/24
This was AWESOME! Can hardly wait for the next chapter. Honestly, why is it that almost no one thinks to ask of what happens to the souls that are kissed?
| G-Unot chapter 8 . 1/24
Glad to see you're back in the game VotN (it's Luda from DLP), was almost giving up hope at seeing this masterpiece completed but I'm definitely glad to see that you haven't abandoned this compelling piece of storytelling. As far as shaking off the rust goes, I really couldn't see any drop in quality from the last chapter so it's definitely still up there. You certainly have an art of making people about characters who they wouldn't give a second glance to normally or would dislike, for example with Dolohov, I was genuinely disheartened that he didn't make it. I'm a bit sad to see this conclude but all good things must come to an end I guess, looking forward to the epilogue soon hopefully (as opposed to 18 months later) and your upcoming projects.
| Celexs Draconia chapter 8 . 1/24
This story is so good. I am very happy to see it updated and eagerly anticipate the epilogue.
| yuuram2fangirl chapter 8 . 1/24
Oh shit! This sure was amazing. I really would love to read the epilouge. Though can u also please explain everything in ur author note next chapter? That would be great!
| Beyogi chapter 8 . 1/23
So Dolohov died... Interesting story so far, thanks for the update.
| SomeGuyFawkes chapter 8 . 1/23
Good chapter. I don't like that Harry's still basically a helpless wuss, surviving on luck and the competence/sacrifice of others. It's difficult to see how this Harry would last 2 seconds if he makes it back to a world at least 20 years beyond what he left.
The chapter was fine, but started to get tedious; might be just as good with a Bella scene, or two, chopped out.
I just wanted them (Harry ) to get out, and then *BAM* the old pass-out cliché and a cliff hanger. Grrr.
Still, good to see that this story might be finished soon and that the possibility of a happy-ish ending is still there.
| Charlesnaismith chapter 8 . 1/23
I like the story, when you updated I reread.
Enjoyable update. I found the action towards the end of this chapter a little hard to follow, though I liked the final destruction of Azkaban and nasty physical damage done to each character.
I think that I was looking for more surrealism and imagery on Harry's flight out - you wanted to make the reader afraid of the unknown but gave so little information that it seemed anticlimactic. I would have done something more like the boat ride in Charlie and the chocolate factory for example, two or three vignettes of metaphors for escape.
If not using sight perhaps touch or sound - harry could brush off spider web or hear wind passing him like be inside a bellows.
Thanks for the update I am looking forward to the epilogue.