|Reviews for Heroes of Arcadia: Learning Curve|
| Trouble the Cat chapter 8 . 4/18/2005
*Reads the part where Alec throws the Poke Ball in to the Gardenia portal again*
ROFLMHO! Tee hee hee, poor Mario!
I like this so far Anthony-san!
*snickers* Well, off to read the rest.
| Gerald Cook chapter 20 . 3/29/2004
Hello Anthony. My name is Gerald but people call me Jerry. I really like the world you created. I also like your Mistings. Anyway, this story is Great. I didn't even know that Amy has psychic power. I'm glad we got to see the Gamemaster's Scandinavian famly. One of the cutest momemts was when Tails's brother cuddled with Anthony and learning about the Companion's "familial" bond. It was also cute when the Larson Clan decided to accept Amy and her Mom into the clan and Amy becoming a Gamemaster. I cant wait to see the end of the "Arcadian Sonic Adventure Afternath" so we can get to the next saga of the Heroes of Arcadia.
| Link Hunter chapter 20 . 5/14/2003
Well, this was a great story!
Let's see...I've got two single chapter stories left to read...
I hope you could start a new story soon!
| Ace Whatever chapter 20 . 12/24/2002
Well,looks like we'll be having Gamemasters running all over the place in no on man!That whole copying thing almost ruined the fic,and you're really overdoing it a bit with Amy(Harsh,but that's just my opinion).Anyway,this is still great stuff.
| ArthurEKing chapter 20 . 10/10/2002
well well well... i knew you had it in you...
you strayed from the tried, tested, and true method of anthony exploring other worlds, defeating more robotniks and getting more powerful, while reuiniting people with lost loved ones, and stuff...
this is actually a good thing :)
Progress! WOOHOO! You're evolving as a writer...
normally i post reviews on seperate chapters... but in the case of so many chapters, i decided to onyl write one long review at the end, because it's just too much trouble to bother writing 20 reviews :) Sorry, i'm a big fan of long chapters, hehehe.
FINALLY! someone more powerful than anthony! Even though he IS just a supped-up version of Evil-Anthony on steroids, it's still nice to know the guy has some limits :)
and i have to admit i WAs kinda wondering just when anthony was going to get an upgrade from his original armor :) and having amy get some too is interesting too.
so you actually had a good enemy, a good fight, a good Build-up to that enemy... VERY important... all kinds of good foreshadowing... very nice. Yor description is getting better, although i still find it very hard to believe anthony could keep up with vegeta for very long... even with psionic enhancements :)
and i gotta say that you gotta wonder what their kids will be able to do if amy and tails ever get together... hehehe.
so this is definately a step in the right direction... i've seen you in this one story address most of the problems i've noticed with your previous work... which is to say the description, the foreshadowing, the use of adjectives and adverbs, the originality of the story-line and the reality of training difficulties.
so those are the problems that i've noticed with this story... if you actually fixed them all and added one or two other plot twists this story could have been like three times longer :) that's like a book man.
and that's when things start getting interesting
because you're more than good enough to do it... and you have the mind for the twists and turns a story can take... and so that's the only thing you have to do to make yourself really great... not just accomplished, and very good... but truly great...
so keep it up man... almost there :)
Arthur E. King
| toon master chapter 1 . 8/12/2002
hey anthony, i'm reading your stories at an incredible rate, one complete story every half an hour.
i got the second chapter of packbell's positivily perfect position done a little late, oh well, at least its done though.
| Guest chapter 20 . 7/30/2002
wooo boy that was great it knocked my soks off
| Ian Reid chapter 10 . 6/26/2002
Cool.I was thinking Ryoko was going to be training or something. And who's Yugi? as in Yu-Gi-Oh? OR someone I never heard of?
| Brian Bloomfield chapter 20 . 6/4/2002
Outstanding... It does the rest of the series justice. Another wonderful Fic from the mind of Bault!
| Izumi Ryu chapter 20 . 5/16/2002
Great job, Anth!
| Aurora-cs chapter 20 . 5/15/2002
great fanfic! write more!
| dnw chapter 20 . 5/14/2002
SWEET! This rocked! Can't wait for the next sequel.
| Wayne the orc chapter 20 . 5/13/2002
Sweetness. Anth. Master Skywalker will definitely be interested.
| Vincent Wolf chapter 20 . 5/13/2002
Good stuff! VERY good stuff! I like this a lot!
| Dr. Thinker chapter 20 . 5/12/2002
Not a bad story! Keep up the good work!