|Reviews for Deep Within|
| Anon chapter 29 . 2/18/2013
Hey great story so far!
You have a really good story line and I don't want to come off as rude or mean or anything but some parts of your story are kinda lame and her thoughts which you put in italic are strange and it doesn't really flow that well sometimes.
It's also really weird how much she sings, I feel like you put the lyrics in there to make the story a little longer and the whole kareoke night thing, yeah, strange.
| SomebodyWhoCares chapter 30 . 2/14/2013
Nooooo come back...
| SomebodyWhoCares chapter 29 . 2/6/2013
hmmmmm its interesting...And sequel please :] ... and lol your welcome i just happend to stumple across her on youtube of one of her songs 99 Times :p
| arizonagirl181 chapter 28 . 1/30/2013
I would read the sequel!
| SomebodyWhoCares chapter 28 . 1/29/2013
I just can believe its almost over... and maybe Kate Voegele and her album A Fine Mess but idk what song lol
| belladu57 chapter 27 . 1/23/2013
| Bloody Rice Ball chapter 27 . 1/10/2013
I can't wait to see who she chooses Klaus or Damon personally I love Klaus anyway update soon please.:)
| SomebodyWhoCares chapter 27 . 12/31/2012
what... really ending?...
| wades wife chapter 27 . 12/31/2012
Loved I and if u end it can u do a sequel, I think it's called that, I love the flashbacks
| Newgard chapter 26 . 12/16/2012
Great Story :D
| Lucy chapter 26 . 12/14/2012
I totally understand your swamped with all your stories! Stessful lol! I just wanted to tell you this is one of the best, well written stories I've actully read. You are such a skilled and brilliant writer! This story is so realistic it's like watching a movie! I've reread this story like 4 times! I really hope you one day write a book because I can tell you it will be a top book. You're plot was perfect and you moved the story along At just the right pace! Defiantly consider me a giant fan of yours! One favor could you possible update next week sometime, I have to get surgery on my knee and I'm super nervous so this would help make my painful day better, but you don't have to if you are to busy! Thanks for writing such a great story
| SomebodyWhoCares chapter 26 . 12/14/2012
thats right... nothing...
| SomebodyWhoCares chapter 25 . 12/6/2012
haha grasss... what else is next? lol :p
| ThePhantomismyLove chapter 24 . 12/2/2012
plse write more
| SomebodyWhoCares chapter 24 . 11/30/2012