Reviews for Brother of Mine
jgood27 chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
kariza2013 chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
really like keep writing this fanfic
asdf chapter 2 . 9/17/2013
you just focus on healing.
DarkAngelLilithX chapter 2 . 12/21/2012
Get better, my uncle also recently lost his entire right arm in a mass-collision in bangladesh. 75% percent of the bones in his body were either crushed or had fractures in them, and I remember even until the very end he kept asking them give his arm back. It's going to be a long and hard recovery for him, but he's going to soldier through. So the best of luck in your recovery process.
Rin'negan Naruto chapter 2 . 12/21/2012
Sorry to hear about the accident, hope you get well soon.
elanga chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
this was great, i realy loved the new slant. it's nothing i've read before. love it.
Shire Fey chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
I have to admit I love this crossover I wish there were more of them. I wish you luck with your story.
Rin'negan Naruto chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
i love it, PLEASE update soon. Ready looking forward to it.
SlyAddiction chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Sounds fantastic so far! I can't wait to see where this goes!
Alec McDowell chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Definitely interested in how this fic plays out. Xander in the AB world fics are either really interesting or completely horrible. This has a good start so far and I like the idea of Xander being Anita's twin (and better half) I do worry about all of the pairings, though. I've never read the books myself but the people I know/reviews I've seen all say that the problems with the series are that the turned into little more than porn books at the end. So, I'm wary of you adding Xander to this and then throwing so many guys, both Anita's and new into his bed. It might be too much. Not enough to not read this, mind you, but in my opinion it would work better if you closed the groups down a bit. For example, you have Xander important for both the leopards and the hyenas so you could just draw his pairings from those. Though I admit the wolves are my favorite group so I'd hate to see them go... On the powers front, it's a similar thing; Anita gained a ridiculous number of powers in the series, but I think you could manage those much more easy so I'm not too worried. OK, I think I've said everything I thought up here sooo hope to see more soon
Acheron Blake chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
The number of men you have for Xander is quite enough; leave a few for Anita. I love this crossover and the way you added Xander into the world. He's the perfect Alpha because of how much he cares for his people and how far he'll go for them. I hope this story will have tons of top!dom!Xander. He's a guilty pleasue of mine and sorely wish to see him in your tale.