|Reviews for Death Flies a Broken Path|
| bookfan86 chapter 5 . 4/30/2012
This is a great story so please update soon thanks
| obsessivesyndrome chapter 5 . 4/30/2012
Gosh I am so glad you decided to pick Tharkay! I'm loving the story so far. Just that I am curious why nobody has yet to probe Harry on where he has came from and where he has gotten his injuries etc. It is a little strange that they had accepted him so easily, other than the fact that they are desperate for a fire-breather? Still, awesome job, Harry is super cute as a childish dragonlet, so hopefully we'll see more of that:D I'm looking forward to your next update!
| Storm Scripter chapter 5 . 4/29/2012
I really like this story. There simply aren't a lot of good Temeraire and Harry Potter stories out there. Keep up the good work, and keep undating! :)
| Exultation of the Gryphon chapter 5 . 4/28/2012
This is really good. It has a lot of potential. However I have a question. What do you intend to call Harry's species? As you have already given some background on them, it is a little odd you did not include a name.
I look forward to seeing what happens next.
| Red Crow chapter 5 . 4/26/2012
merci, merci for the beautiful story! i can't wait to see what happens next? and some Harry/Temeraire love? hoohoohoo you author you. keep writing! :D
| SensiblyTainted chapter 5 . 4/20/2012
Love love love this story!
| Meike chapter 5 . 4/19/2012
uhuh, you're right, he is the PERFECT choice.
And you're lucky, 'cause we haven't even the e-book version of the next book in Germany(were I come from and am).
So, to your story:
I really like it! It's good to read, logic and the characters are authentic.
Best wishes from Germany
| Nghtmrduc chapter 5 . 4/17/2012
Awesome story! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
| Warror chapter 5 . 4/17/2012
This is an amazing chapter! I was like, "Yes! He found his captain!" And the description of how he looks as a dragons is completely awesome. I can't wait for the rest of the story. I was so happy that he finally fond his captain, then I was super sad that you ended it there. I can't wait to see what he says! Keep writing please. I can't wait for the rest of your story.
| Lina03 chapter 5 . 4/16/2012
Yay i love his captain, I think they will make a good pair...Can't wait for more! _
| Ungodlyone chapter 5 . 4/16/2012
Cool story bro.
| aalens chapter 5 . 4/15/2012
Another satisfying and well-written chapter! Thank you.
Can you tell/remind me please; what year is it when Harry meets Tharkay? (I need to work out what has happened/not happened to Tharkay at that point in the books.)
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| Eggbert 3000 chapter 5 . 4/15/2012
Oh man, now I can't wait for the next chapter. *giddy*
Thanks for the update! Tharkay is one of my favorites.