Reviews for Unlikely
NatalieLynn chapter 27 . 9/29/2013
Good chapter! Bella has got to stop doubting Jasper. Doesn't she know how much it must hurt him when she does? How hurt would she be if he showed that much doubt about her love of him?
babesbraves chapter 27 . 9/4/2013
Fantastic story so far I can't wait to read more!
TwistedNeiviv chapter 27 . 8/23/2013
Good chapter! :)
jeangary28 chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
interesting start and also awesome
Anabely chapter 27 . 8/21/2013
I am glad that Bella owned up to not listening to Jasper to some extent, but I don't see why Emmett gets off scot free. He instigated the whole argument by telling Bella his made up ideas about Jasper's feelings.
Fakin'it chapter 27 . 8/21/2013
In Chapter 19, you said Emmett was going back for Charlie and sending him to the extended family in Denali for protection, so Bella felt comfortable becoming a vampire because she knew her dad was safe. Then in Chapter 23 Charlie calls her having talked to Edward and tells her to 'come home' making no mention of having seen Emmett or the Denali family. Yet at that point Bella is no longer concerned about Edward and Maria going after Charlie and using him in their revenge plot. Now we are seeing that Maria is going with her own plot, but Edward is probably going after Charlie like he'd originally planned. So what happened to Charlie being safe and sound in Alaska?
cathy29jes chapter 27 . 8/20/2013
hi,
and now, Bella still had jumped to conclusions by not listening to Jasper and making the answers herself, she will have to be more patient, it will avoid that domestic scenes with Jasper
excellent chapter,
cathy
cathy29jes chapter 26 . 8/20/2013
hi,
ouch, Jasper erred, he wants to kill Edward, but not to kill Bella Maria, what's the problem? Jasper fears for Bella or Maria? it is really not good for communication, but Bella did not have the patience to wait for answers, not easy to understand in all this,
excellent chapter,
cathy
cathy29jes chapter 25 . 8/20/2013
hi,
It is true that Bella has a lot on his shoulders in a short time and it is mainly the fault of Edward, he was found to separate Maria Bella Jasper, it was also to see Charlie try to separate them from another way, but it remains that Bella will try to get him,
excellent chapter,
cathy
cathy29jes chapter 24 . 8/20/2013
hi,
here's a surprise, Char was pregnant and Peter was jealous, it will perhaps help Jasper go through but if thought well, he also had a relationship with Bella and Alice before she could also have the same problem,
excellent chapter,
cathy
cathy29jes chapter 23 . 8/20/2013
hi,
Edward actually believed that Bella would go sagemement at home, he does not know that Bella is a vampire, Edward is going to have a surprise and if Charlie thinks Bella will go there too it will be a surprise,
excellent chapter,
cathy
cathy29jes chapter 22 . 8/20/2013
hi,
I think Edward Emmett will also have to spend to get to Bella, and there's going to hurt, it does not affect his family, Bella will be protected with everything that Emmett
excellent chapter,
cathy
cathy29jes chapter 21 . 8/20/2013
hi,
Bella's first hunt went well, now that Bella is as strong as the others if not more, Peter and Emmett will have to be on their guard not to get your ass kicked, you must still learn to Bella fight before that,
excellent chapter,
cathy
cathy29jes chapter 20 . 8/20/2013
hi,
it is a vampire and Bella is dear Edward will be put in play by a furious Bella that I dared to threaten his companion and father,
excellent chapter,
cathy
cathy29jes chapter 19 . 8/20/2013
hi,
Jasper is not good communication, Bella thought he no longer wanted it, it's amazing that it is not felt the emotions of Bella
excellent chapter,
cathy
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