Reviews for Dark Descent
TypoKween chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Awww that was bittersweet. Good job!
lovedavidbeckham chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
I put this on follow jus in case you decide to continue it
alisapay1 chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Very interesting! Thanks so much for writing! Mwah!
CullensTwiMistress chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Wow. Intense. chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
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BellaTesoro chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
I love how you started this out all secrets, and sex. And then opened up that it wasn't just the addiction that mattered, but that each of them were married.
Great lemon. I like when the sex opens up to the real drama, and the minimized word count actually increased the drama. I like the fast scroll down to find a swift conclusion. Kinda like how you started and ended your wall sex. Fast, furious but satisfying. But that doesn't mean I don't need a full story to get more. This story sure could give us more, so if you want, flesh out these two characters, I'd read more.
monicaalexr chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
are you continuing? xD
tink125 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Hi, I was reading color of loneliness and it just disappeared, im dying to read the rest of it. Do you have it posted somewhere else? Please put me out of my misery.
tsm0836 chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
What a wicked little O/S just enough words to tantalise.
stonecoldhart chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Love this. Wish there was more :(
XxX.Love The Devil.XxX chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Love the story :)
LecterCullen91 chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
WOW, you really got me here lol! :) i didnt expect for edward & bella having an affair... 1st i thought bella was like a hooker or something, that edward needs for release/just for sex... Really liked your story! :) keep up the great work.
jjuliebee chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Whoa. Intense.
peshiosha chapter 1 . 2/12/2012

EPOV's r always awesome ;) this one was just too HOT! his thoughts couldnt hav been more Yummy! p

married/kids/affairs! HEA have a funny way of becoming reality sometimes /
colourfulchatterbox chapter 1 . 1/26/2012

I was just going through my To Be Read list and I come across this!

Dude...some intense writing there :D

GREAT work.

Not sure what they is to say to this...good luck to Bella and Edward? Die Jacob and Tanya? Or both of those :P
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