Reviews for Take What You Want
christykq chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
I like this fic but Edward has me (and I guess Bella) a little dazed. He's like a whirlwind that rushes into her life and out again, just as quickly.

I've never written anything with word prompts but I'm sure its difficult. Good job.
whohellanoes chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
he's so goofy...she totally digs it. and it helps that she got to see his caring/defensive side. i'm really enjoying this. thanks so much.
Luvtwismut chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
That chapter cracked me up! I swear I remember a guy or two that acted just like Edward at High schol. It's got to be exhausting to be 'on' like that. thanks for the update, PA!


Melany333 chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
love it
carebear309 chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
Ew Edward...jessica?
Edlovesme chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
I love this Edward. And Bella has it bad she just needs to admit it to herself.
aidanmomma chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
Oh man. I love it. I love him. So much goodness here it's unbelievable.
CullensTwiMistress chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
Obnoxiousward is seriously tugging at my heartstrings! lol
alli62 chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
I am totally hooked on this story already.
lebells1 chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
He got down on one knee. Presented a ring. At her doorstep. Nice move. That's... some bold honesty... and gut.

Looks like DirtyFlirtward has got it bad. Oh, just admit you like her! dfdkgjdkdlgdfdfhhhjhjkkkhdidf

"When I'm done with Jessica, I'm coming after you, Bella!" This literally makes me... um... um... like woah! WTHHHHH just happened? ;o)

Since I'm feeling shameless, I'm gonna ask. And want... mooooreeeeee~~~

bells xoxo
Ruibin Rua chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
What this Edward does to me! He is completely obnoxious and infuriating and rude and chauvinistic and... And hot as hell! lol I just love where you're going with this, even if I'm as befuddled as Bella right now. :-) x
FFpassion chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
Your Edward has me laughing one min then confused the next :P

I'm getting the vibe he likes Bella but Jessica's his girl for now, boys! lol

Great chappie, I'm having a great time with TWYW.

Thank you for writing.



shaz308 chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
She lost a contact, how was she driving home? Look forward to your next chapter thanks.
Swino chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
Oh poor Bella, Edward is really f*cking with her mind at the moment. It's like he has decided a little bit of reverse psychology will work best. If I was Bella I would want to slap him around a little only to grab him the next minute and kiss him. He's too much, but I love it. Alice owes Bella big time, not only does Edward now have her address - I'm sure he is going to get up to mischief there but then Bella had to act as chauffeur to Edward and his games with Jessica. There and back. That had me in hysterics, not only did he decide the way to get Bella to reciprocate his feelings was to date Jessica but he decided to do it right in front of her. I have to feel sorry for Jessica as she will end up being collateral damage.

And then we have Mike, he is boring. We don't want a boy that follows the rules and leaves you there on the ice, crawling around looking for your missing contact lense. We want the hot, sometimes stinky boy, who looks after you. But will Mike end up asking her to the dance? Alice you need to help a friend out and sort out Bella's relationship woes. She needs some help as Edward is going to do her head in. Kissing her neck like that and making promises you know he'll keep. Fizzle indeed...hardly!

I know you're posting ahead on twitter, but I'm trying to refrain from reading it. I suspect I'll fail now :P
Maplestyle chapter 3 . 1/7/2012

But I don't want him to be with Jessica. Or her to be with Mike. I want them together.
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