Reviews for On a Hogsmeade Bench
Dandy352 chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
I love how a simple maybe from her is enough for him to get all riled up. :)
MichikoMichiyo29 chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
God, I feel like such a sap! But I can never resist good, old fashioned Jily (Made that up totally on the spot O.O Is that what they call it?) Fluff!
Loved it!
bookwyrms chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Love love love love love! That was fantastic. I think you captured their characters perfectly, and I loved the combination of serious conversation and funny banter. Also, it's very nice to find a fic that doesn't completely rush the story and make the characters do things they wouldn't do for the sake of the desired plot. I was half expecting Lily to say yes, or realize that she was in love with him, or kiss him or something like that because that's what happens in almost every story, but I'm very glad that that isn't what happened. And yet there was still enough adorable cutesy stuff to make me perfectly happy :) Great job!
cannotstopwriting chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Loved the idea of this, it was a great little read!
Jenn222 chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
Great job. I adore it. I wasn't sure about it at first because of the 'you' thing, but it was written so... Wonderfully I think is the word and it just... Wow. I love the way you described everything and how you showed their thoughts.

screaminghallelujah21 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
I liked the story, but I didn't like how it was written in second person.
bullet.sophia chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
simple and sweet. i like it very much. :)
TheKikGeek chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Cuteness LOVE IT! Aww, that made my night!
PenPaperParadise chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
This is incredibly cute. I love the story that James told about him and Sirius, the way you wrote it was superb. Keep writing cause I'll keep reading! :)
True-Gryffindor-Auror chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
This is excellent! I loved it! Please, please write more!
DesignerPhoenix chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Wow this is really good :) I love it xx I really love the way you've written it! Will you pretty please write another one? Xx