Reviews for The Lightning of Halkeginia
Guest chapter 4 . 4/16
This pacing is terrible. I'm done.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/16
Pacing is too fast, severely cheapens the story.
Necr0m4ncer13 chapter 6 . 9/11/2015
Hello, I really like the story so far, and would like to see it continued.
I'm hoping you decide to pick it back up.
technodude458 chapter 2 . 8/15/2015
that comment about Sunny's cooking your thinking of Rose's cooking which Cambel makes a comment on in one particular codec conversation in MGS4 Sunny's cooking is a form of fortune time so if the eggs turn out bad something bad tends to happen
Guest chapter 6 . 6/20/2015
SuperNova chapter 1 . 5/26/2015
The Weeping Prophet chapter 6 . 5/8/2015
plz make more it is 2015 and it has not been updated since 2012 and its a great story
activemars828 chapter 6 . 3/29/2015
I really like what you've done with this story. Hope you're having fun with what you're doing.
activemars828 chapter 2 . 3/29/2015
I'm loving this.
raigalcc chapter 6 . 11/8/2014
i taken a liking to this, hope you'll update soon 83
ZERO chapter 5 . 6/13/2014
Still no chapter 7 yet?
KnightyNight chapter 6 . 5/19/2014
Very amazing story thus far, i'd love to see more, really. -
ultradoomdude chapter 6 . 1/3/2014
Please update this story OR ELSE
Vinyl Scratch3 chapter 5 . 12/29/2013
Oh and he's also said that "Raiden" essentially means "Lightning Bolt" so you're calling him "Lightning Bolt the Lightning"
Vinyl Scratch3 chapter 6 . 12/29/2013
I'm confused, is this the Raiden before it after the prime minister of Africa was killed? I can't tell ._. Also a few spelling mistakes but nothing too bad. I'm really quite enjoying this. Although I'd imagine Raiden reacting with less surprise at things since he's had much bigger ones and shouldn't be surprised by much now. And isn't his skin fake? I think he says he tried to hide behind synthetic skin at one point in Revengeance and it sounded like it was before it's events so I'm unsure. Also he's stated that even though he can survive without things like food and nano paste and other stuff he needs it after about a week or his brain shuts down. And there's also maintenance on his body and even his newer one needs that. I'm just curious if that'll be acknowledged and if so how it'll be resolved... Or even if it will be resolved. Good story hope you continue .
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